A good read...I'm surprised no one's explored this concept more.

Interesting twist on the GFs thats for sure, Havein' them act on their humans partners more bestial sides.
'sides I can see where that might be alluring to some...*smirks evily* Makes sense to that it would be Eden, she definitly different from the rest, even one's like Odin or Phoenix.
Feel a little sorry for Squall though seeing his girl friend play Carnivore, It would make sure he'd be a little
gentler with her.

Whoa. I like this. :D So cool. Love how Squall was so sweet. Must've taken a lot of brainstorming to write this. ^_^

god. /damn/. Not sure whether I want to issue more challenges or run like hell. ^^

You're just too good for words, d00d.

I suppose this would have made more sense if I had ever actually SEEN Eden... but it was still insanely well written. I was absolutely horrified through most of it, and the ending commentary helped me calm down. XD

That was...hahaha. It seemed a lot more morbid and horrific when just reading it and skipping out on that lovely comentary at the end. Seriously nice description though and a real feel for..eh...Hannibal-esque mentality. Perhaps a little too good. *l* I'm also impressed how you managed to convey the sense of 'team' and a tangible bond between all of them in such a short piece that really focused around Rinoa and Squall. The mark of a good writer is all over you, but this I knew anyway. All I have left to say is that I'm glad I have you on author alert or I'd of missed out. Do more, but more Zell next time please. ^_^

You are, without a doubt, the only person I know who could get something like this to work. It's just another one of those reasons for me to admire you. And it gives me another reason to poke fun at Rinoa relentlessly. And yet another reason for Squall to fear for his life. XD Poor boy.