 vegemite 2005-06-12 . chapter 1Ooh, I like it a lot. Ah, I *heart* dialogue :) Aww, that was so sweet...and so depressing. I rather like it. |
 Selina T 2002-06-03 . chapter 1 Quite exquisite. 'Tis not everyday you read a fanfic such as this one. I like it how you have Amidala admit that she doesn't really love Anakin.
This story is a refreshing change from all the Anakin/Padme and Padme/Obi pairings. This one is a bit of each, but never crosses the line, which in this case serves the intention very well.
Had it been any other story it would have been a shattered faliure.
I suggest you write a sequal to this - like Padme and Anakin's wedding or something. Anticipation once again. Jeez. When is there not anticipation?!
A job well done. The title fits quite nicely.
Good on ya. |
 saicho-18 2002-05-21 . chapter 1hey,
i like i like i like i like i like i like. i really like your fic. cute and funny and romantic at the same time. too short though . . }:(
saicho_18 ^-^ |
 Brown-Eyes1 2002-05-06 . chapter 1Aw...
Wonderful... |
 Glitter's Infatuation 2002-04-13 . chapter 1“I’m turning around, General Kenobi. I won’t peek until you’re in the water.”
“Don’t you dare, Your Highness…”
“Done yet?”
“No.”
“Done yet?”
“No.”
“Done yet?”
“Will you- I’m done, I’m done. You can turn around.”
*giggles* Cute! |
 freaker 2002-01-24 . chapter 1 awwwww. sooo good ilove it. keep writin good stuff |
 val 2001-07-05 . chapter 1 loved it |
 val 2001-07-04 . chapter 1 great job, please continue writing fan fic |
 eretria 2001-06-20 . chapter 1Sweet! Very sweet, and it's so nice that it didn't have a happy ending. LOVE stories like that. :o)
Just - How I wished that you would have brought some setting into it, like how he looked like and how he felt/she felt on from here: “Please.”
“Your Highness?”
“Don’t mention Anakin, General Kenobi.”
“Don’t mention him? You’ll be… married to him soon.”
Because I was like: Touch her, kiss her, ANYTHING!!! all the while. :o) (I'm a hopeless cae of a shipper, what can I say?)
Still, the idea of a dialogue-only fic is intriguing. Thanks for posting it! |
 Padme 2001-02-22 . chapter 1 That was interesting but I kept on pictureing my love Obi-wan as c-3po and myself as Ryoko on on Tenchi muyo. otherwise I found that a great storie.(crying)The ending was sad. |
 Hello Dee 2001-01-17 . chapter 1I thought this fic was pretty good, but...I miss ani! =( What's with all the obi/ami fics? |
 The Id. 2001-01-07 . chapter 1 Hmmm...I tend to stray from the Ami/Obi Fics but i liked this one. |
 LeiaJade 2001-01-06 . chapter 1 As I say to all Ami/obi fics, I don't agree... Padme loved Anakin more than anything. But other than that... cute fic... i loved all the double-meanings! 0=) |
 Kimmoiiee 2001-01-05 . chapter 1yeah, i'm not to fond of ani after hearing him saying YIPPEE |
 Donna Lynn 2000-12-31 . chapter 1 Great story! I just loved it. I truly think as the next two episodes go on that Obi-Wan and Amidala will develope a certain relatioship. |