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| Reviews for The First Time |
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   devilangelchick 12/1/03 . chapter 1great chapter! so intense! |
| Dark Angel215 11/23/03 . chapter 1 Great story |
| Jeff's favourite skittle 10/19/03 . chapter 1 Oh, that was so good! The way you used repitition to your advantage, that was great. The opening scentences had me hooked from the beginning. How sad, who did Jeff cheat with? Maybe that's all apart of the mystery. Please keep up you amazing work. Fan 4 Life Jeff's Favourite Skittle |
| Cat Lea Takersdarkone 10/12/03 . chapter 1 God this one is great. I really love your stories. |
| JeffAndShannon 10/11/03 . chapter 1 Oh! That's so good! And soo sad! Poor Jeffy! I love those two. |
