si^^ tama is really cute when he is nervous^^

you are gr8

yay!

Hi Bestie! MAGPAPAKASAWA AKONG MAGINTERNET NGAYON KAYA SUNODSUNOD ANG REVIEWS KO HAHAHA! LAM MO HABANG TUMATAGAL NAGIGING MAS CREATIVE ANG IMAGINATION MO! SA 220 LANG, I DON'T KNOW IF I NEED TO SUBMIT A REVIEW IN EVERY CHAPTER PERO AT LEAST MERON!

that was so touching and definatly true love!... love ur fics espeacially Tamahome and Miaka! hehehe...
thought it's ur first it did still attract some of us but keep up the good work.. keep writing and maybe soon u'll get to write a really beautiful atory ne?..hehehe^-^...
best wishes to u...

This is so cute:) I liked the soap opra part. Did I spell that right? Oh well, I only know what it is in spanish:) Anyways, I love it!:)

I love this chappy!!

very good or great

I thought that was a good story.

Well, your summary caught my attention.

I've only read the first chapter and i don't think i want to read more.

Reason being is, i really can't understand and tell the difference between Miaka and the narrator. One moment is Miaka ran off. Then it's an 'I'. I seriously can't understand it at all.

Perhaps, try editing your story. Stick to one thing. If Miaka is the narrator, it's and 'I' all the way. If Miaka is not the narrator, then it's a 'she' and 'Miaka', not both at the same time.

wow that was beautiful! plz dont leave it like that! *puppy dog eyes*

Hi! I am new to the Fushigi Yuugi anime,(I have studied it for a long time, wait...now I sound like a god damn bookworm)And I know that Miaka is the Suzaku no Miko. And I stand for Tamahome(In my opinion the hottest one)and Miaka fanfics everywhere! So continue your story!

I can't spare you. You really need to improve. Why don't you get a few friends or writers to critique your work and make alterations before you post it?

I know everybody has a first, so to speak. But if the first is bad, then so be it. Why don't you read your own fic? Then surely, as a reader you will know that this is a piece of writing that needs a lot of improvement.

Your dialogue, description, language, character developement...whatever has happened to them?

Okay, well, I really loved this fic! You have to continue it!