I love this

Aww, this is such a cute story! I've always kinda liked the sad or angsty ones, but I'm just kinda weird like that. Anyways, you should do a series of one-shots about a whole bunch of pictures that the Z Crew took! I think that would make a really great fic. Would you mind taking it into consideration?

This was so cute. I wish I had an actual picture of Goku with his arms around Piccolo and Vegeta. Bravo, and great writing as always. :]

that party seems to have so much life. i can almost feel the happy / not-so-happy atmosphere.

anotehr great fic :D

Aww, very sweet. I'm always a sucker for Mirai stuff. I love the History of Trunks video to death, and these just add to it, you know?

Excellent mixture of bitter and sweet, very pleasurable to read. Great job! :D

*alternates between laughing, crying, snickering, and sniffling*

*sniff* this is so sad. Wonderful story, very original, angsty with a nice dash of humor-I loved this!

Wow, all your stuff is so wonderful.

Another fantabulous goodie! I'm beginning to really ENVY you. Jealousy... tsk tsk! _ I really enjoyed this! The camera thing was HILARIOUS, mwahahhaa! Yeah, Goku and his goofy off-time moments! I can really imagine that, heheh... poor Piccolo. _ You're VERY good at writing, though I'm sure plenty of people have told you that already. Actually, your's rivals even Leia's, and lets face it, she writes some kick-butt fanfiction. You rock! And not a bunch of cursing or anything, either! Great stuff... make more Gohan/Piccolo fics!

AWWWWWWWWW! That was so cute! Goku's such a trouble-maker with his camera! I loved this story really sweet. Keep up the good work. Ja ne!

I absolutely adored this fic. I read it on Son Rhandi's website right after Long Goodbye. It was so tender. I loved your descriptions of the pictures (ie. sneak shots of Vegeta and Piccolo). I laughed myself, even though the humor was smack dab in the middle of angst. You make it all so real. So human. GAWSH I love your stuff. How's the epic coming? I'm so anxious to read more of your works...

What websites are they on?

Hmph. Interesting. (Not as negative as that sounds). This is the first Mirai timeline reminisence story that doesn't detail their deaths - mine did. *sheepish grin* I like that you were able to interpose the happy past with the grim present and a glimpse at what was to come. Everyone was perfectly in character - though I don't know why I bother saying that, because I've never found otherwise in any of your stories. I liked the bit where you said Piccoo COULD have caught Kuririn, if he'd really been trying - you showed that Pic' was just trying to save face. That was beautiful. Well done! .. again ..

*sigh* I love your fic! So cute...

*sighs* As usual, Onyx, this was wonderful. I've always hated how Gohan seemed to forget Piccolo-san and the others in "History of Trunks", only mentioning his second father three times or so. Loved the pictures part *laughs* especially Pic Veggie being so uptight about it, and the stories to go behind the pictures. They only kept some? Why? *shrugs* Well, that last sentance was ominous. *shudders* Poor Gohan-chan... /.- Beautiful ficcy, Onyx, you really out to bring the first "Dark star" over here on ff.net. *nods* Well, gtg, ciao.

Quite powerful story, I'll say.