Beautiful! I loved it so much.

Excellent story and good POV. Could see this as a scene within the storyline.

Wow I love it !

Beautiful! Keep it up:)

Hey that was a great story it was sweet and sad keep on writin

Wonderful story! Great characterization and I loved the emotion put into it. Great!

Very good story, right on target! To coin a phrase: keep up the good work!

GREAT job! I loved it! Your writting is excellent as well as the emotions. Congrats on a wonderful story!

very enjoyable characterization piece.

I loved the end! Keep up the good work *_*