Intresting... J/k I liked it. It made me laugh.

Please consider the fact that I've never been properly schooled in the ways of reviewing etiquette, so if its improper to write a direct reply to someone else's post, than please forgive me.

Now that he introductions are over...

"You think I don't have any talent what-so-ever in my writing on the fiction novel 'The Journal of Hiei'. I do appreciate some advise but let's see how you take my advise.

1)When writing a story make sure you actually write a *ING PARAGRAPH! The sentences that you right and the breakings when a someone else says something makes this so called story sound like a PLAY rather than a fictional story."

...Thats...kinda the point...

Script format is a very common way of writing, yet its understandable if you haven't ever seen this style before, mainly because its best used in humor fics, a genre that you might not frequent.

"2)For reviewers viewing pleasures, I suggest you describe the action more clearly so that your reviewers can get a better understanding and mental picture of what is taking place at that moment."

Darkwing goes to this "The Journal of Hiei" fic

O_o WTF?

deletes that part about SMLS6 not frequenting humor fics

That was understandable wasn't it! _

"3)Make your stories more enjoyable. I took one look at this thing (it's so bad that I can't even call it a play or a story) and shook my head before scrolling all the way down to the review button. I find this writing and insult to writers and playwrights everywhere, no matter how big or small."

Wow! We have so much in common! All I did was look at the first few words of your review and I was immediately insulted by "I know you and you..." that I started pasting unread sentences and reviewing them!

I REALLY hope that you just wrote something about skipping something.

"This isn't so scheme of revenge for the nasty little review you left behind at my story. These are mere suggestions on what you should approve on and practice at. I won't bust your ass until my reviewers know what you and some other bitch wrote. Oh no, I'm not as to to disembark to that level while reviewing other writer's stories."

When FekketC first found your story, she might have been looking to find a decent fic about Hiei, when she found your fic, she probably tried to find a redeeming quality for a least a chapter. Yet as you stated in the sentence that I hope you wrote, you only glanced at her fic, a scanning method that is perfectly fine for figuring out if you want to read said fic, yet to REVIEW IT? no, and I would call "Burning a Book by its Cover" misplaced revenge.

"Now then, I will rap up my review by telling you that I at least think I can be even considered at your level for your ever so gerious review. I mean, I know that I not clearly accepted among girl peers as much as I am to the male population but that is only because I can only get along WITH the MALE population. The FEMALE population just seems to *ing stuck up and all around they think they're better than everyone else type of people who are known as thet preps. I hate the *ing preps."

Wow, you contradicted yourself worse than a Republican with ADD.

"It seems to me that you have a dysfunctional apprehending to comprehend the talents of other writers."

You could run that through the Babelfish translator from English-German-French-Spanish-English and it will make more sense.

"It seems to me that they must include/understand dysfunctions, to which talents of other authors to include"

O_O Holy crap it does!

"If you wish to contact me, tough shit! You could, however, give me another nasty gram. Thank you."

I can understand if you don't want to release your E-mail, you probably too busy using it to make sure kittens/puppies and small girls with cancer don't die.

Mildly apologetic - Darkwing Bat

I know you and you know me. We'll get a few things straight right here right now before I let the rest of my reviewers in on the thoughts swirling about within my brain.

You think I don't have any talent what-so-ever in my writing on the fiction novel 'The Journal of Hiei'. I do appreciate some advise but let's see how you take my advise.

1)When writing a story make sure you actually write a FUCKING PARAGRAPH! The sentences that you right and the breakings when a someone else says something makes this so called story sound like a PLAY rather than a fictional story.

2)For reviewers viewing pleasures, I suggest you describe the action more clearly so that your reviewers can get a better understanding and mental picture of what is taking place at that moment.

3)Make your stories more enjoyable. I took one look at this thing (it's so bad that I can't even call it a play or a story) and shook my head before scrolling all the way down to the review button. I find this writing and insult to writers and playwrights everywhere, no matter how big or small.

This isn't so scheme of revenge for the nasty little review you left behind at my story. These are mere suggestions on what you should approve on and practice at. I won't bust your ass until my reviewers know what you and some other bitch wrote. Oh no, I'm not as to to disembark to that level while reviewing other writer's stories.

Now then, I will rap up my review by telling you that I at least think I can be even considered at your level for your ever so gerious review. I mean, I know that I not clearly accepted among girl peers as much as I am to the male population but that is only because I can only get along WITH the MALE population. The FEMALE population just seems to fucking stuck up and all around they think they're better than everyone else type of people who are known as thet preps. I hate the fucking preps.

It seems to me that you have a dysfunctional apprehending to comprehend the talents of other writers.

I'll sum this up so that the simple mind of your can understand, nobody is perfect.

If you wish to contact me, tough shit! You could, however, give me another nasty gram. Thank you.

SingMyLullabySweet6

It's a funny parody, but very weird, and since it's based on a movie, the play-style formatting is acceptable. *Suddenly gets the idea to put on a YYH play.* Bad brain, bad. Sorry 'bout that, update soon!

LMAO! This is so great! plz update soon!

Wha! No Hiei! Any who, I learned something! I didn't know that Bara was rose in japanese. that's cool! Please, please, PLEASE update soon!

LOL LOL LOL!

OMG! This was an awesome chapter, just because it bearly had someone from Cowboy Bebop! You know, the whole Faye thing! Oh yeah, and I am loving the humor. Maybe Kurama can end up saving the day? ... So, I still can't be in it? XD

i read it, veri veri good, my friend.
question..why aren't i in your fav sstory or author list? i just wanna know::tear: you don't like me anymore? ::sob:: WAH! YOU DON''T LLIKE ME ANNY MMORRE! ::runs away in a fit of tears:: mean person, i'l never say anyhtign nice about your stories ever again. there were all terrible.!
p.s. just messin' wit ya, my friend. i'd never say anything like that to your face... ::sweat drop:: i mean ever. dammit, i messed up another review. :gulp: uh... gottagobai ::rushes off somewhere where fekket can't find her::

Hi! jazziesoccer2, if you don't remember me. i think your story is funny! i hope you like mine, review domo? hey, i noticed this in your other story and this one, sometimed you mix up the 'i' and the 'e' in words. and you spelled refigerator wrong in thew other story, i have my word set to run spellcheck and it picked it all up. does your word processor have it? just curious. hey, i'll read your other story and review there. Ja ne todomachi! (think thats spelled wrong.) Kuro Tora!

Really great job! I loved all of the mooing stuff done. Great story, creepy with the wolf's corpse

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_ Great Job. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Cool Fanfic Update soon!