This is an interesting story. Are you finished with it? I hope one day you finish it!

Very mysterious. I think you have the characterizations spot on. This story is really good and I can't wait for more.

hello,

the jealousy between wendy and kristin is a bit too much in this story and I stopped reading it. neverthless the story is well written and I hope to read something else of you in the future.
yury

hi,
a teacher of mine has called elenora when I was at middle school. she was a really strict nun. ^^° this memory came back while reading the beginning of your story.
the first chapter is really interesting and I am really exited what'll happen next.
I think wendy is jealous about kristin. ^^ poor woman!

bye yury

Uhh, I think this this is really, really spooky. I think I like Westphalen as much as any guy. Cool use of turning the tables on us. One of the most charming, sweet SQ people... I'm too busy with this twist to even be curious about the rest.

Really cool beginning to a story. I didn't see why Westphalen wouldn't keep Lucas in medbay when Smith did. Knowing Lucas' messy room. Still very good all 'round.

This is one of the stories I would like to see you continue. I like the possibilities you've set up here, and hope you manage to find the time to complete this story once you've finished the others that speak to you more clearly!

I'm very sorry it's been so long since you updated this story. I enjoyed your depiction of Kristin and the mystery surrounding her. Wendy was an interesting original character, and I'm finding it really frustrating that all the questions you've raised in this story are unanswered! If the spirit ever moves, please make people happy and complete this!

You have got me hook. What an interesting twist with Kristin. I always thought Wendy would have turned evil, but I like how you wrote Wendy's character. I am really enjoying this story.

I'm enjoying your story, sorry I haven't been reviewing very regularly. In most stories it's clear fromt he start who's side the author is on, but I can't make up my mind if you like Kristan or Wendy, but maybe that's just me. (For my money Wendy can't compare to Kristen) I like that you may be bringing Ben and Katie together too - they always made a lovly couple.
Cadi.

Great story! I can't wait to see how this plays out. Kristin is my favorite and the second and third season of Seaquest held no luster as far as I'm concerned. I hope that we get to see more Nathan and Kristin interaction. Looking forward to the next installment.

hi, i love the story so far. i am a huge fan of kristin so any story with her is awesome. i love the conversation she and lucas shared, it was sweet. keep up the good work and good luck with finals.

Great story!! I love that you included the Kristin/Bridger story. I'm very curious as to what's going on with Kristin. Is it really her acting so strange? I hope she's not evil or anything! I also like the tension between Wendy and Kristin, although I would really like to know what it is that's wrong.
Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more!

Hey, this is pretty interesting. You do a good job of Kristin :)

This story just keeps getting better and better. It's so nice that Kirsten's back - and so not nice that something seems to be amiss! I'm looking forward to your next chapter! Please don't take too long!