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dib rocks 2005-07-17 ch 4, anon.	abusegreat update please i like the part when red yells don't go in that closet
dib rocks 2005-07-15 ch 4, anon.	abusethat was good update plz
Dlbn 2005-02-25 ch 4,	abuseUm...this is SO cool.I think this whole story was a great idea.I was thinking that mabey you could like have Red GET caught at what he's doing and mabey that alien thing will give up and tell the truth?Thanks for reading this and it isn't neccesary to use my idea I just thought it sounded funny.Okay um bye. ^-^ -Dlbn
Hakai Ryu 2004-07-29 ch 4,	abuseOnly three letters describe this fic: L O L XD Really! This is one of the funniest fics I've seen!
invader johnny 2004-07-24 ch 4, anon.	abuseplease continue soon its a very good story please dont be mean and contimue wait did i just said that twise yay im just like gir.
Daz:MistressOfMercury 2004-02-25 ch 4,	abuse::snicker:: I loved Red's comparison to an artist.. Great job, I think I'll like where this is going. And yeah, I know lots of people, and myself, have stopped reading around FFN's IZ section because so much of it is so bloody BAD now.. Ugh.. But I'll keep an eye on this. Hope to see more soon.
Ashsema 2004-01-12 ch 4,	abuseGreetings deranged black kitten of doom, Another adventure well done. The vision of them all being flung around the ship was great. Thank you deranged black kitten of doom, and thank you Keeper of Memory Pepperochu. Please continue. (Still waiting to find out about the mysterious intruder.) –Ashsema
Ashsema 2004-01-12 ch 3,	abuseGreetings deranged black kitten of doom, Action can be difficult to write but you do it quite well and even successfully spice it with humour. Very commendable. I cannot wait to see what future adventures will come, and to find out about the mysterious intruder. –Ashsema
catcrwaler 2003-12-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseI have an idea for the next chapter! whan they reached the planet, when they go on the break how about: Red gets caught by the police when pick poceting! Zim is forced to help repair the ship but when another asteroid dented ship sees him working wonders on the ship they take him! Purple is off some where and Tak is going mad to find them. she dosen't want anyone to be left behind. An assain come after the captian and the main charectors...(can't spell at all!) so there are some idea's. twist them use them i made em' for you and enjoy them. it's not offten i can get on the internet.
Darx 2003-12-26 ch 4, anon.	abuseOh mama this story just gets better and better dont it? =) I love the way the characters act in this story, its damn funny! My faves Zim, cos he's all smart, tho Red comes a close second cos he's a pickpocket! Your dialogue is very realistic by the way. sigh. i won't ever be able to write as cool. 0.< ANYway keep up da good work! (and damn this review is long =P )
Invader 2-D 2003-12-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis is Great! keep going,cant wait for more ^_^
Invader 2-D 2003-12-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis is Great! keep going,cant wait for more ^_^
Darx (who is back if but fo... 2003-12-13 ch 3, anon.	abuseOk, i'm not entirely sure if my other review actually got posted so i'll stick this one up =] The story was veddy kik ** and thanx for using my idea! Must put story in favourites now. Grr, if this review doesn't make it i swear i'll whacks computer WORK DAMMIT! Ahem yeah :} Good story!
2-D 2003-12-07 ch 3, anon.	abuseTHIS IS GREAT! KEEP GOING!^_^
Daz:MistressOfMercury 2003-11-08 ch 2,	abuseHm.. Very nice AU, I like it. As for plot ideas, I must say, I'd rather just sit back and watch the fun. I love how Zim acts in your story.. ::snicker:: Excellent. I'll be watching for more of this.

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