Oh, it's so pretty! Your descriptions are so beautiful~

Haha... experiment?

love it

it opens poetically, using adeptly the backdrop of a secluded and romantic spot in the waters. salty kisses indeed. the dialogue is short, but is given much expressiveness from how aya and ken interact, touch, and smile (or frown momentarily, in aya's case). sentences are long, due to all the poetic descriptions packed into them. yet the descriptions served nicely, making this peek into this couple's life a sweet vignette.

so descriptive. i felt like i was really there. please continue!!

I liked the way how you opened wide and grand, with a vivid description of the scenery and then narrowed it down to the two people in there. A very good read, romantic in more than one sense of the word. :)

Wow, the imagery in this was SO spectacular! I actually FELT the ocean breeze! WAI! I liked it. More, please?

I'd like to see how this turns out.. *smirk smirk*

+Joist-san

*blinks* wow that was awesome!!

*Is reviewing is reviewing* Humms...interesting...will there be more? I hope so...heh