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Kristy4lyf
2008-06-26
ch 3,
abuseIs there more? Tell me theres more...
moony's number 1
2008-02-01
ch 3,
abuseWow, I have to say this is such a great story, your dialogue is so perfect and exactly what they'd say, it's amazing. Update soon!
cheeky-chaos
2006-08-01
ch 3,
abuseWow, that was awesome. Definately one of the best Sarkney fics I've read. You captured the characters very well, and I loved the witty banter ;)
I'd love to read for of this story if there is any!
Cheeky.
CandyCentric
2006-06-28
ch 3,
abuseBRA-VO!! Thats gotta be the cutest story I ever read!
qblisa
2006-05-09
ch 3,
abuseYou are very talented! Not only are you able to effortlessly describe the minute details of the characters movements, you were also able to portray their thoughts and feelings so realistically.

You are VERY talented at writing Sarkney encounters and banter... Just brilliant!! I LOVED this story and am adding it to my favourites. Can't wait to read the sequel - RSVP.

You truly blew me away with your amazing writing talents! Thank you.
Lisa :)
phi4858
2006-04-15
ch 3,
abuseI'm really amused and found this par hasard again and reread it after nearly a year. I feel sorry you stopped writing. Perhaps you decide to start again.
Verity Kindle
2005-12-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseHeh. I loved it. You captured their characters and reactions very well.
southern cross
2005-09-18
ch 3,
abuseok wow. i just red this off of a rec at lj and i am floored!! so sweet and dark and wonderful and light and just everything sarkney needs to be.

she'd bitter but open and he's still sark but not crazy/evil like so many other fics portray him and i love them!!

am i making sense? sorry if i'm not i'm just overwhelmed by the greatness. i'm off to read more!!

-sara
poppy
2005-04-16
ch 3, anon.
abuseThis may be too late for a review of your fic, but I just have to say that I loved it! So much!
Cameron1
2005-01-19
ch 3,
abuseAwsome story I totally love it! it's so sweet!
BohemianSpoon (tolazytologi...
2005-01-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseHave I ever told you how much I love this story? I might've when I was IEatGlue17... But seriously. This has made my day...

The whole entire rattling milk comment made me laugh out loud. As did the "was this a tomato?" Thank you for the smiles...

-Mac
weiss-weiss-baby
2004-09-15
ch 3,
abuseThat was great! Keep going? Please? : )
RosieW
2004-05-05
ch 3,
abuseHey, this was so excellent! I want more but I have a feeling that that was the last part... More? Please. I love the way you write Sark... or Marty (I loved that... Syd's continuely calling him Marty... it was so amusing.) Anyhow yeah... More? Or at least another Sarkney Story?
Venus Smurf
2004-04-08
ch 3,
abuseAs always, stunning chapter. You're one of the most gifted, insightful writers I've ever come across, and I'm enjoying every word of this fic. You're incredible!
Venus Smurf
2004-04-08
ch 2,
abuseFunny, eloquent--you leave absolutely nothing wanting. I can't get over how well you've written this. Keep up the excellent work!
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