Yay! A fic (almost) completely dedicated to my favorite Evo character! xD Haha, "My pants are full of Pokemon!" That's a great image... but what if Charmander had come along? 0.0

Ha, that ending was great... icky, but great. XD I was cracking up the whole way through. Great work!

Oh my God... That was so funny! I was drinking a soda when I stated reading this, and, like an idiot, I took a drink while reading one of the more funny parts.

I think you can guess what happened.

If not, let me clarify- when I laugh while drinking, it goes up my nose. Since it was a soda, it was extremely fizzy, which added to the shock/tickle factor.

In the end, I had to spend ten minutes cleaning off the screen and keyboard and freaking out that I had broken it.

Go ahead and laugh, my bro did.

It was an excellent fic, i love all of your stuff! Keep it up, you monkey-like person! Or is it person-like monkey...?

Very funny. I loved the bit with the pokemon. The great aussie pyrokinetic. Afaid of cartoon fuzzies. Nice.

Yup, Pyro's a Burninator alright! Great story, are you going to write more? Really funny.

Ah, nothing like insane laughter just before dinner (insane laughter during dinner can lead to choking)

Kit, if you hurt Pietro any more, i will harm you. Why? Because Sammi likes Pietro. ...Sammi aslo has other bishoene who are actually anime characters, but that's not the point.

More! I love you! You make me laugh and bounce! I want more more more more more more more!
Love,
Tainz

Hehehe... That was funny! I love Pyro insanity!
Rawk on!

~snickers helplessly~ yeah go pyro .. ~snickers more~ you definately have a gift kit =^-^=

...BRILIAN!!

'Somehow it had eluded him to simply put out the blaze with a blast of his own pyrokinesis.'

Aslyin: *snort* That was hilarious!

Kaeleigh: *blinks* And disturbing.

Aslyin: Fire!

Kaeleigh: She means, she wants to see Pyro burn socks.

Aslyin: Thats what I said! FIRE!

Kaeleigh: *sighs* Shes obsessed with socks.

Aslyin: YAY! Update soon! And the Jamie story! Yes! Cause Jamie rocks!

Kaeleigh: Aslyin wrote a disturbing story with Torpid and Sabertooth.

Aslyin: It is so beautiful.

Kaeleigh: It's something anyway.

Aslyin: *pulls out camping gear* I am sitting right here until you update. Something.

Kaeleigh: By the way, Aslyin saw a picture of you on your art page, one with the scarf? You and her look disturbingly similar.

Aslyin: It's gotta be the hair.

Kaeleigh: ^_^

Aslyin: UPDATE! PLEASE!

Kaeleigh: Do it to shut her up.

Aslyin: FIRE!

hilarious and wonderful. i loved it.

OMG, officially one of the funniest things i have ever read. Had more milk comming out my nose than a class of 1st graders on pixie stix. One little nitpick thtough. You said this takes place before The Private Life..., but S-Tooth mentions 'the runt' which is Jamie. But still, kicking story :)

that was so awesome. laughed all the way through. loved the whole pokemon thing. and the mary poppins thing. loved it all.

'Nutcase White'

LOL! Oh man, it's all made clear, that's the only colour i could have my room when i was a kid...my parents scarred me!...for the better of course, but still...

It was like snow! Only really, really bad-tasting, funny-smelling, and not as fun to throw *Giggles uncontrolably*

Oh man, i was laughing so manically, my dad called from, downstairs asking 'if i was alright?' Great fic, much loved!