This is one hell of a good story. I sorry I did not review before I was to hooked into this story. I had to finish this story. Now I am on to the next one. Please keep up the great work.

good chapter and update soon this is getting good.

I like your story, but your chapters are so short that some of the A/N are longer that the chapter. I can't wait the read the sequel.

great story!

great story!

great story!!

I think Dumbledore never really had any barriers with students. his relationship with Harry is different but I'm sure this is not the first time he's mentored a student.

Dumbledore's not exactly sappy, just upset. I think he's more human than JKR lets on in the book and would feel pretty upset right now. I like Sirius' will but i think he would out something in there about Snape not bothering Harry anymore and given all grimmauld place's books to hermione. Good job!

Hey great story! I enjoyed the switching points of view, it made it more interesting! Well I'm going to go read the sequel!

I don't have a fitting word for how...how..."wow" this story is. I hope I have some room in my favorites.

Your typing set up was a little wonky in the beginning, but it smoothed out into good paragraphs through the story. That's about the only wrong thing other than a few bits where I made a bit of sense by pushing the words around in the sentences. Pretty good!

This is an excellent story. The grammar could use a little work, but I have seen a lot worse.

Awesome and I Love It!

lol Yeah, I suspected something of that sort would happen, and I tried to suggest it in the chapter where Dumbledore left Kreature with Umbridge but the stupid thing wouldn't let me. lol Anyways, I'll read on.

Oh goodness, now the adjreniline starts pumping in my blood. This is so much more like it!

Okay, Harry was a bit out of character and Dumbledore slightly, very slightly. In Harry's eyes, Dumbledore's the wise old Headmaster. One who broke his trust, but still that wise old headmaster. He's not likely to swop jokes and stories with him. It just isn't likely. While Dumbledore's rather open and probably would tell the story, it's just not like Harry to do that. I don't know, it's just... sort of out of character in my oppinion. Otherwise, it's rather amusing.