An interesting read. Forsyth did indeed 'under-write' his book.

I wish there was more 'Phantom of Manhattan' fanfiction- particularly that where the plot changes leading to a whole other outcome.

Well done! :)

Awesome.

Well that was only about ten gazillion times better then that awful book. You COULD continue this and change the rather unbelievable ending into something as wonderful as this was. PLEASE! Masterfully writen and the dialog well manipulated back into the art it was supposed to be.

Now see, Forsyth, THAT is how you write a book! God, I could not STAND Phantom of Manhattan...but, that's not the point. *Ahem* Wonderful job! Loved it! If only that had actually happened...*mutters dark things*

As a great believer of "fixes", this is one of my favourites. I read that novel in a day and this is the only scene I actually remember (apart from that awful, evil ending, of course...) Very well fixed indeed, mam'selle. I could FEEL that as Christine does, especially the very last few paragraphs. Wonderful! J'adore!

wow! considering how bad the novel is and how unrealistic the dialogue is (sorry, I speak as I find) this is a fantastic fic! more please!

One word: Wow! Considering that the book was not that good, you turned one of th better scenes into a much better scene then Forysth's entire novel. Great job!

:)Maya

oh wow! i love it!

Hiya Crys! I've told you before (as "Angel of the Opera" at CD's board) but here it is anyway: I love this story! Too bad Forsyth had to write the Phantom of Manhatten for this phic to come about. ;-)

good job!