this is great. I think it should've been a girl though.

I just wanted to know if this is possible. What you siad about the trigger for the test results.

I Love this~ pleaasee update your 7th HEaven stories son!

im lving it. LOL

great story

Again, this was not dramatic and it was poorly written. it is really boring and totally unsuspenseful.

Umm...
It was a good idea for the story, but you really didn't develop your plot very much. Both styles of wrting were poorly written and the story was just boring.

great story

i am not trying to put down your story, but that is way too corny. i mean they find out she is pregnant then she loses the baby. the she finds out she has brest cancer and then she donesn't in the same day. then she gets a call that she is pregnant. this is to corny and not suspensful at all.

Hey good.I don't think it matters what Lucy and Kevin have but it sounds like everyone wanted a girl.Doesn't matter to me just keep writing

Good, but you point way too many exclamation marks! Plus, you didn't put much suspense in.
Lucy: Kevin and Ihave an announcemt to make (Everyone looks at her) We're going to have a baby boy...
Or something like that. It was really a very good chapter, and I'm really sorry if I criticized too harshly or too much. I'm anxious to see what you have in store!

i love them please write more soon

Hey its really good keep writin.Austin and Mackenzie are also cute boys names.

Cool chapter, so its a boy?!? Thats awesome, well sorry my review is so short, but I got a full inbox, Keep the chapters coming! Thanks, buh~bye! ~Pam~

i dont get it. everyone asks 4 a girl and u make it a boy. o well, its still a good story. update soon.