Awesome chapter, I loved it! I hope you don't give up on it now, this story can go a long way :P Update soon pretty please

I'll be waiting for the next chapter...

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WICKED miharo is comin to tekken 4!
do me a favour...WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!!

wicked! just as gud as the newer tekken story!!

i love ur story! lol itz soo kewl! ^^ heehe and it was funny how u put sango there lolz i like inuyasha too!! lol! keep writing! >

PLEASE UPDATE! or i'll cry! ^^

Very nice story...I'm a huge fan of Ling Xiaoyu...update soon!

well i didnt read this yet but you like ayumi hamasaki oh my god if you like her you should .listen to trish thuy trang try trish is awesome from ranking system trish and ayumi aka ayu has a perfect 100

Hey! It's so Good go on Plz!

good story please update!

I like this and your doing fine, I personally like Julia and Hworang together that's why I am working on a lemon piece of them two right now.

Hey there mattie pah-tattie.
Wassup wassup.

Well enough of that. I love first timer flicks and other pairings. But what I DONT like is Character bashers. That's a bit of a **, if I do say myself.
So...
WHY ON GODS GREEN EARTH DID YOU STOP?
WHat the hell is wrong with you? I liked it, why didn't you keep going? And where's this Jin and Julia thing you thought that went s'posedly out the window? Id read it. I mean I give out good reviews... ask Knight wing. LOL. Im like his lil' story stalker.
I'd be yours too if you keep going with this.
One thing though. Your tags? Let microsoft do it for you. Just save as a web page once you have done typing it. Then up load it like that. And you wont have the tags visible and disabled. Just type the story as you normally would and Microsoft word will do it for you. Just your lil handy lessons in life that makes typing a WHOLE lot nicer. ANd easier.
If you are bored and need something to read. Please? If you could? Can you read mine? Whiche one you would like. That would be a god sent blessing on ma part!

LOve your story. The best part is of how you discribed the relationship with everyone that is involved in Ling's long and twisted life of hers. Her past feelings for everyone and such, makes you visualise what happends next.

Well I better not bore you anymore! So yeah, longstory short...
YOur story rules YOU BETTER KEEP GOING AIGHT! THAT"S NOT A REQUEST! DO IT!

Mahalo Plenty! Jaa matta ne!
Lahtinah Kerrigan.
(Im going to add you to my Author's alert thing, jus to keep tabs on you) I'll be back!

YAY! Jin/Ling! I loved the little ending part too. Really good. Keep on writing!

Oh please continue soon, ok??! There's something in this story that makes me wanna know more and more and what happens next! I just hope things will turn ok with Xiaoyu and Jin. This is a very good start! Maybe that's what makes me wanna read more... Well anyway, I'll shut up now and let you continue this (hopefully soon!) ^_^