wow...that was amazing...**wipes tear**...i just wish Sai didn't have to dissappear

oh! i just loved it! it was really moving and sweet... :D

I enjoyed this greatly. It has a quiet sadness and yet it's not overbearingly angsty. The rhyme scheme was good, and I liked how you used it at the end to be able to cut him off anf have the reader still know what the word was supposed to be. An excellent piece!

~Miiko

Awesome poem^^ I can think of two sets of lines I particularly liked...

"Like last time, I'll fade away
But this time, I know why"

"No more need to play for me
No need to be my pawn"

I really liked how you phrased those. You convey Sai's thoughts really well^^ And I liked how it isn't really finished. It's a nice effect. Great job!

It was beautifu- ^^;

*sniff* Aw...that was a sweet poem...I cried so hard when Sai left...now the feeling is coming back...I love how you did the end of the poem, it's not finished and it adds to the atmosphere, good job^^

I really liked that
It was really thought out well
and it left me feeling sad
so it had to be good ^__^

~Lil

This poem was great. It really is a good way of explaining what Sai might have been thinking right before he disapeared. And I liked how the end was right from the actual series dialouge and still fit in with the poem. Good job!

~Kay