And... Then she was still alive.
Great.
I'm wondering why I find myself so surprised, actually. She's a Sue. They don't know when to stay dead and let the rest of us enjoy the story. Nope, she has to come back and fuck things up again. And then oh, wait! Another "noble" sacrifice! How sickeningly fitting! And this one came with a speech, too! Oh, and it's not over! Now she's the key to defeating the Master Villain!
I'm really, really sorry. I shouldn't be venting like this, but goddammit... I hated that Sue!
If the plot itself hadn't been so good, I fear I would have tried to murder another pillow.
That makes me cry.
D:

Throughout this whole entire thing, I was praying to every god I could think of that that annoying Sue would die. Of course, it was obvious she would, and it would be an "epic sacrifice." That Sue was so sickeningly predictable that the only thing you were missing was a final speech, for Christ's sake!
While I did love the story itself, the Sue... Let's just say this: I knew from the moment her name was typed that I was going to despise her and wish I could strangle her. Noble as hell, self-sacrificial, beautiful...
Yeah. I was really expecting that final speech. Now I suppose they'll be about it.
"Noez, my precious Sue! Why?!"

Marvellous story, but horrible, horrible OC. I'm sorry, but I really, really hated her.
And now you hate me too.

lol it really is an interesting idea to pair up Dark Magician and Magician of Black Chaos, they really are a funny couple, me likes >.< cute. Great story

~Shana

i loved it!

Yaay!i loved this one!

o...i loved this chapter.

Yaay!i loved it!!

wonderful story

wow,thats a great prideshipping fic!really great,I'm glad that it all turned out good in the end.
see ya!
-TT

I really absolutely loved the story. My fav part was when the fighting started, but Yami and Kaiba knew in their hearts they could not hurt one another and stopped it. I thouroughly enjoyed Unanticipated Emotions and can not wait to read the next!

This is an awesome story.Please keep up the good work. I don't think anything about this story needs to be changed. I am excited to read your other work.

Oh I absolutly loved it! That was an awsome story. Very well written. My heart was fluttering the whole time through it. Though I still can't believe it took them 5 chapters to get together. I loved it and that is enough out of me.

^_^ A HAPPY ENDING! IT was beautifully written and beautifully ended! I'd ask for a sequel...but that's be asking too much. ^^ Like said, I enjoyed reading all eight wonderful chapters and I look forward to re-reading them all in class when I'm bored. ^^

Hello! I just LOVE this story! You wrote it perfectly!

Yay! That was great! ^_^