FAIL.

1. For ripping off Japanese anime.

2. For ripping off Disney movies.

3. For attempting to combine them.

4. For all the annoying and incredibly distracting Author's Notes inserted randomly, everywhere.

5. For not letting me discover anything. You tell me everything. You do not, however, show me anything. Which makes me supremely uninterested in the mary-sue. With her perfect body and 'bestest' friends.

6. Are you trying to tell me that she looks absolutely nothing like her mother? Not one ounce of her Japanese characteristics shine through? What, are the Japanese not pretty to you?

7. Sirius, once again, portrayed as a shallow flirt. I'm beginning to wonder why Suethors think it's an achievement for their Mary-sues so fall for Sirius. He's pretty easy, apparantly.

8. So far, I see absolutely no plot and no point in this story. Unimpressive, bad characterizations and a Mary-Sue lead with the tried-and-true overdone love/hate thing with Sirius. She has a last name that isn't Japanese (and as her dad is an American, it doesn't make sense for him to have a surname like that anyway) but her mother is Japanese but, strangely, doesn't have any Japanese features at all and has a name that is commonly used for pets. But, I guess her being Japanese somehow...links all the random stuff you took from anime and shoved it in this story.

Wong is not a Japanese name.

And maybe you can have the characters act... well, in character? Just a suggestion.

awesome

sweet ... but what's with name, MoMo?? no offense, but even MiMi sounds better

Your story wzas quite intersting and it made me wantto meet more. I hope that you will update!!

BUM BUM BUM! That's..that's...THAT'S...EVIL! Yes, the cliffhanger *shakes fist* UPDATE SOON!1 haha 1 lol

YAY!! YOUR GONNA USE MY IDEA!! YAY!! *claps hands like a retard* ^_^ yes, this was a good chapter it was long. Hehehe, I liked it. Good job! update soon... I am!!
~TBC

AH!! YOU COULD BE RAPED! BY *VOLDIE*..come to think, that's nasty..lol
Great chappie, and YES you better update soon! lol

I just started reading this story so thats why i havent reviewed before. It kinda scared me at the end of the chappy! I looked down to see the little next botton! and it wasent there! I'm like! WOUW ! I ws shocked! So please continue so i wont be shocked any more! Toodles

OMG! your SO evil!!>.< That is not a nice cliffy!! GRAH! I must know what happens... Oh and are you going to use that scene from that one chat we had with your evil alter ego? good chappy! but your still evil... much love
~Alanna

Oh, that's a MEAN CLIFFIE!! *gets toaster and fork* MEAN! *gets Kidz Bop CD* WHEN I SAY MEAN I MEAN IT! *cries* I wanna no wut happens!! ..why are cliffies fun to write but not to read?? ..o, I made a GOOD lil quote there! Mwahahaha..anywayz..
Great job!! ^ ^

WE*jumps off bed and runs into wall*blacks out*
Alanna: -.- must it always end like this?

hehe cool chap cant wait fer the next one! BYE!

WOO, MY REVIEW BUTTON'S WORKIN! ..ok, anyways, lol, great, funny, scary chappie! lol. Now I know wut PEBBLES 'BOUT! POOP! lol ok, I'll just end this now before I 4get wut I was writing...wait...lol

this chap was cute! bad destiny and claire bad hehe BYE!