Max had always been his hope. That's why he was in love with her. They made a cute couple. I love this fic despite how short it was_

I love your writing style! Keep up the good work, but please, write longer stuff? Stories? Lots of them! Eeh! *goes to read more of your stories*

A sad and moving portrayal of Logan's dispair. The hopefull ending was great.

Awwwww! Very touching! Loved it! -LadyCallie

awsome story!

Wow. This is the first of your stories that I've read, but even though it was short, I can tell you're a really good writer. At least, from this it seems like it. Beautiful wording...I'll have to read more.

Grahpper lurves sappy stories like this... Grahopper wants more stories. Grahpper also thinks she should stop refering to herself in third person...lol:)

A very impressive work on Logan-both well-written and intriquing. The descrption part and emotional thought part are well tuned to each other and not a single line seemed boring. It's easily the best Logan POV story I've read. Oh, and if you don't mind me saying, it's better for the readers if you space paragraphs. Easy on the eyes and not too distracting; I think that's the usual technique used in many fandoms. Anyway, thank you for the insightful story. ;)

That is what he could feel. I like the way you wrote it

I like it how you dragged my heart down to my feet and then pumps it back up! Keep it up! Write more!

that was good.. sighhhhh Logan ;)

Very inspirational! I loved it, you've got to do another!

Wonderful! You captured the essence of hope and fulfillment. I've often thought Logan was pretending to be strong, to be more than human because of Max. You've broached the subject very well. Keep writing!

Woohoo! Very nice, I like it! I'd love to hear more, you've got a great grasp of grammar and all that shmack, and a wonderful grasp on the characters. Sequal? ;-) Can't wait to read more of your work, keep it coming! :-)

Very nice...It's intresting to see Logan having a crisis of faith, and even more so to have Max be his saving grace. Good job please continue writing!