An exllecent story my friend really love the intreractions of the minor characters nice sequal to the fourteen

No se quien dijo que las peliculas nunca se terminan, solamente son olvidadas por sus directores.

Creo que tu piensas igual. Muy buen trabajo con la reedicion de tus historias!

Keep the good writing.

A very good story. You really found a way to make Mary Melody a great heroine. Good use of other authors characters, both in this story and the sequel ("Marley´s daughter). I like the detail of giving the Bunnies kids the personalities of several Tiny Toon and Looney tunes characters, like if they were their favorite uncle/aunt, or each one godparent; Chuck seems to be Calamity´s, Bekki is Fowlmouth´s (obviously), and Annie seems to be a mix between Babs and Lola (she is both hyperactive and competitive).
It´s also a nice touch naming the Fourteen after the great animators that created the classic WB toons. I guess the only thing missing is a story to link this one and the sequel, to finally make the Second bit characters, friends with the Stars. Obviously, you had shown that the Bunnies and the JAM are close friends in the future, and I don´t totally like to see Shirley angry with anyone besides Plucky, so this must be settled. Making Fifi hang around the minor characters is a good start, and you can even pair her with Furrball or Calamity (after all, the coyote is the second most important minor character right after Mary).

Great piece of work, J.A.M.! I haven't enjoyed a fanfic as immense as this since the glory days of alt.-t.v.-animaniacs, alt.-t.v.-tiny-toon. and alt.-t.v.-tiny-toon-fandom! It reminded me of such other classic works as Kim Robarts' "You Are What You See" and Justin Massengale's "Tank Squirrel" - hope to see more in the future! (BTW, I'm aware of your latest work, "Jacob Marley's Daughter", but, please, DON'T stop there!)

Who is the mystery two-tone?
Another great Fic!

Holy...J.A.M., that was magnificent! IMO, it blew Back to the Future out of the water. A fantastic ending to the Mary trilogy.
Oh, and the two-tone Mary was referring to at the end was Foxy, right?

So this is taking place after "The Fourteen" does?

Interesting, a very good start, but I will kindly wait for more chapters to show up.