Its a nice story but I don't understand something...Hojo was actually Inuyasha? Or Inuyasha used magic to turn into Hojo for ONLY that day? Please email me back...I really wanna know! :D

I liked the whole story, I didn't like how Inuyasha was Hojo.

not sure if i reviewed this one or not, cuz if i did i didnt read it, moving on. I LOVED IT MEL! OMG...you realize that every time i read one of ur stories, i feel like i am there or have a very graphic image in my head as to whats happening? you and beth are the only ones who can do that. KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE ROAD TRIP!

OMG, i luv it. Although i am a bit confused at the begining about sango and shippo as reincarnates or watever, and kagome being his mom...?

Ar, we must be in the Caribbean, cuz I see a pirate...ar! Yeah, you are basically "stealing" Rumiko's work when you use his characters, and "your" personalities. It doesn't matter how good you think your story is, or how good it may actually be...if you use someone else's hard work and stamp your name on it it is "piracy". Not try'n to bum you or anything...most people don't even think about it, but it sucks when you see someone do it! And how do you come up with this whole "seperate" personality for these stories, if you aren't using your own? One can usually only write from ones own personal experience, or dreams, hopes, fantasy's, etc... Just curious! Hey, just say "NO" to pirates...ar! BTW, don't get all jacked about my email addy...it was a private joke!

You may not "recieve" this well, but I find it somewhat pointless to call this "fan fiction" when you change the characters actual personalities. Isn't the point of fan fiction to put characters into situations you may or may not normally see them in, and show how they react to them regarding their personalities? It's great that you have unique personalities to give people, but if you're going to go that route, I'd suggest just giving them different names and making it original fiction.

You might want to cut down on the swearing, also. It really brings down the quality of your work. Especially that "f-word" you like so much.

Just a few notes after reading some of your stories.

I think you should put up the Avril LaVigne song. I want to read it.

Cute. However, I must say you definitely suckered me in by using Evanescence. Good choices on the songs as well.

~Lady Hiko