Reviews for Adventure Inc Story 1
kas 9/24/05 . chapter 4
good story, please carry on. Can't wait to see who got shot.
bastet 4/20/04 . chapter 3
Well...
What's next?
AllyKitty 11/28/03 . chapter 3
Hey, I like your story so far. I'm dying to know what the doctor has to say, so if you could update as soon as you have the chance, that would be great!
Wolf Jade 10/30/03 . chapter 3
hey like the story please update
Evil Attack Penguin 10/26/03 . chapter 3
Not bad, exept space out the first chapter a little better. _
vonnie836 10/20/03 . chapter 3
Okay, so tell me, what does the doctor have to tell them? Don't let me wait too long, please!
vonnie836 10/20/03 . chapter 2
Just discovered this story, wonderful job. I hope school will give you some time and you can update soon. I can't wait to find out who will get shot - Rei or Judson or maybe one of the others? Don't let me hand in suspense too long.
shebajcf 10/18/03 . chapter 1
Are you gonna make this into a full blown story? Cos that would be really cool! Please continue with this okay..