|Reviews for Thougths on Loss|
| Ghostwriter 8/20/08 . chapter 3
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| a-blackpanther 1/3/04 . chapter 3
I missed this story when you first wrote it. Anyway it was...i think your best story. You captured their feelings very well!
| brennan mulwray 10/14/03 . chapter 3
aw! thats so sad! its really good, but its really sad! good job though! :D :D :D
| Psionic-Wrath 10/13/03 . chapter 1
Just a smidgen to much of clichéd primordial angst. Try to add more value to feelings of misery, so as to avoid siphoning characters of personality.
| lornein 10/13/03 . chapter 3
Very good and accurate character sketching!