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WCInsane
2006-04-26 . chapter 3
OMG...ok so getting thru the first 2 chapters was definitely worth the 3rd chapter...hope you get more to this soon
moonsnite
2003-12-11 . chapter 3
*pouts* when are you gonna update?
its really good and im dieing to know what happends next *puppy dog eyes*
Shin-chan
2003-10-19 . chapter 3
you left it here? *sigh* damn. oh well. i'll check back later, and see what's happening. pease update soon!
Shin-chan
2003-10-19 . chapter 2
whoa. what's with the words? in every sentance or something, two words will be stuck together. is that on purpose, computer error, or spelling error? confuzzled, let's hope the next chapter isn't like that. the words start swimming wit dat cute merman~!
Deathsythe babe02
2003-10-15 . chapter 3
Great story hope you update!
shuu1982
2003-10-14 . chapter 3
This wouldn't be based on the Little Mermaid in any way, would it? ^^ Either way, since I love both The Little Mermaid and Gundam Wing, it's good. ^^ I can't wait to see more!! ^^
Tattooed-On-My-Memory
2003-10-14 . chapter 3
Is good! is good! write more please! WRITE MORE!
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