Oh -- I love this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens to Niles, really ^_^ (Poor guy.) I really wish their were more chapters here right now though, lol. I hate having to stop.
Anyway...
I love your writing style, you have the character voices and actions detailed so perfectly!
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(Continue soon)

Brava! I see your writing talent for the best comedy ever has not left you. I am curious as to what will happen in the next chapter. A most excellent start, you've captured the characters well. Please write more.

I like it :-) Please continue!

Cute start.

great story so far. keep writing!