AW! I love this! So cute!

GOD!

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Hmm...

That was cute, and perfectly fluffy. I wish I could mine that simple...

OMG! It's so sweet and cute and fluffy and YAY! It's just... YAY! lol... awesome story!

Adorable! Y'know, I never thought I'd see the day that Inuyasha would turn into a regular Kenshin Himura, atoning for the lives he's taken. Though granted Inu specializes in closet monsters rather than political activists and bandits (lol - *grin*). Anyway, this is really cute.

(*sigh*) I should just give up food altogether and live on fluff for the rest of my life...

CUTE! Very cute! I was a bit confused at the beginning, but I totally get it and LOVE it!

I just have one thing to say:

AW!

AAww...fluff!

And philosophical thinkamabobbers.

All in all, very well done. I particularily like Inuyasha's one line:

“Well, fuck, Kagome! Do you think I’d lie about something like that?”

Maybe it's just me, but I could actually imagine him saying that. Which was amusing to my anime deprived mind. Anyways, great job!

Lily

I love this story! It's soo good!

Well, I suppose it was a nice, plotless little story. Though I think it went a bit too quickly and there was really no point to the whole thing. I don't think there were any spelling mistakes and that probably saved the story. Aside from that, I'm afraid it was a bit useless. I'm sorry, I don't mean to be harsh about my critique, but there is nothing truly interesting about this story.

o, nice story. Good one when you need to cheer up. Really liked it. Is this a one-shot? If it is, then keep writing, I can't wait to read some more of your fics!

I hope it's not ending here! This story rocks!

BYEZ!

love,

KMM aka Hellfire, TBRR

Nice, I really liked the way that this was done!