 ChildOfFate17 2008-12-15 . chapter 13Well, hello there! Long time no see! I was beginning to think you had given up on this fic.
And when you say "filler," that's really what you mean. This chapter was way too short. =(
Anyway, I hope you'll continue with this! Don't let Writer's Block keep you down! =) |
 psycochick32 2008-12-08 . chapter 13I'd definitely like to see more about this. I'd also like to see more of the other characters - it seems you're focusing at times only on Sesshomaru and your OC.
I'd also like to learn more about the boys... what was Sesshomaru talking about when he mentioned dark days? Why must they harm their mates? |
 ForgottenXOne 2008-12-08 . chapter 13lol
aw. i've been reading this story for nearly 4 years now.. almost five..ish. i think.
I still get excited whenever you update.
&& It is still one of my top favorites of all time.
Thank you, very much. Even if it was just a bit..
I enjoyed every word, of every sentence.
I just hope it doesnt take another 5 years to finish this. lol
Cya 'round.
=] |
 me 2008-12-08 . chapter 13 pretty cool chapter. i wonder if anyone else will like it. |
 Ayumi 2007-12-29 . chapter 6 OMG you r the best jumping up n down in glee i love this |
 Soir Lune 2006-12-26 . chapter 1tokia...im not into manipulation. so i reviewed, because the story DESERVED to be REVIEWED. ask anyone who read it, they would tell you the same. anyways, i have my own com. so it wasnt dire. |
 ForgottenXOne 2006-12-21 . chapter 12Bravo ^^
You've still got it...
Thats nice to know. |
 ChildOfFate17 2006-12-14 . chapter 12I liked the first part of the fic. It was so... deep, you know? How the very core of her being was crying out for release...
Very interesting... I wonder why she wakes up when he tells her to wake up? Oh well. Guess I'll find out later!
Good luck with the next chapter!
Fluffy'sMate17 |
 Tokia 2006-12-14 . chapter 12well i updated. I hope you all enjoy this chapter. much luv and stay safe.
Tokia |
 ChildOfFate17 2006-11-20 . chapter 11*squEAL!* YOU UPDATED!! OMG!! YAY!! SO HAPPY!! GOOD CHAPTER!! ME LIKE!!
YAY FLUFFY SAVES THE DAY! W0T!
WAH HURRY WITH NEXT CHAPTER! |
 ForgottenXOne 2006-11-18 . chapter 11I have been reading this story for over a year now and i must say that you are one helluva writer.
I love your stories, your chatpers, the way you write.
I truly do mean it when I say you are one of the best writers I've come acorss on this website.
Badass chapter!! Keep it up. =]
But, watch out for spelling errors.
Update asap
Stay safe ^^ |
 Tokia 2006-11-05 . chapter 11well i updated. i hope you all enjoy it. much luv and stay safe.
Tokia |
 inuyasha's little angel 2006-07-15 . chapter 10You up dated! YAY! I love it, update soon! |
 ChildOfFate17 2006-07-15 . chapter 10ABOUT TIME! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to it!
Under the part "II" Rin said "That is all". She should have said "That is all,". You know, with a comma. Just a small mistake I wanted to point out. Oh, btw, did you ever get an editor?
Yeah, I'm seeing other small typing errors, but there's a significant improvement!
Wah it was SO SHORT! HURRY WITH THE NEXT ONE! I WANT MORE! |
 blaze 2006-07-03 . chapter 10 i really like this chapter, despite it being short. i love the detail. i can see all the darkness with just a hint of light. i love ashati, her and the darkness she dwells in |