This was real good, as expected. I liked the whole fire-dancing imagery. yay.

this is great! And its good that you were pestered to write a VS story, as there should be more of them. T_T

Well done.
I hadn't seen anyone actually add mullenkamp in like that before.
I'm trying to write a VS fic myself, but I'm a horrible procrastinator.
Anyway, nice fic. You know the whole 'vagu-shonen-ai-thing' that went on throughout VS? Well you captured it nicely in your fic.
P.S. I want more of your FFVII fic. ASAP.
^_^

Most excellent and a little confusing at times but I know that was the effect you were aiming for. To bad it's a one shot though. In the meantime I still say you should type up the ones on paper.

nate