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| Haru no hana 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abusei will look for the "continuations" XD kisus |
| Zarz 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseMayura as Loki's miko makes so much sense when you put it that way! I love Yamino's attempts to explain things to Mayura as well. This is a very cool next installment of Learned to See! I love how you've moved the story along! |
| Draculina17 2006-09-13 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! |
| winterflower 2006-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abusehehe, i can't believe that yamino want to get all this after he helps mayura with her problems |
| Yami-chan and Unrealistic 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! Me likey Yamino!! |
| Unseen Watcher 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abusehmm. This is turning into a really interesting Round Robin. Very nice. I hope it continues (and I can find it all). |
| sushi girl 2005-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! i love you, i love your fic. i love yamino. espically yamino. ^^. yay. there just arent enough fics with yamino in them. thank you thank you thankyou. ! |
| LittleGreenWolf 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThank you so much for continuing the original story. I really enjoyed it a lot, and you're continuation was just as enjoyable, and really sweet. I only wish for more. T.T And really good revelation there with Mayura. I never noticed it before. @.@ So many new fanfiction possibilities there. New chapter possibilities there. *hint, hint* Please continue if you can. |
| Quidditchbitch 2003-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou really SHOULD write more. *pouts* PLEASE?!?!?!?! I like this so much. |
| Mystic 2003-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseFinally I can review this! Fanfiction.net was having problems (as usual). I love this story and you pulled in many elements that most people wouldn't consider. Mayura may be a mystery freak but I believe each of us claims to want a bit more excitement and yet when it comes none of us are really sure what to do when it happens. I believe you captured this very nicely! Keep writing! |
| Psycho-CJ 2003-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was pretty cool. Loki, you coward. I definitely think Yamino deserves all that stuff. That part about Mayura being a miko and all was pretty interesting, I never thought of it that way, but it makes a lot of sense. I wonder how Loki is going to explain about what he is about how he is Yamino's and Fenrir father. Good job! |
| Amaya Shinkuyoake 2003-10-14 ch 1, | abuse**laughs** I just love the way you write Yamino... makes it so I can totally sympathyze with his situation in having to !explain! to Mayura which really should be somebody else's responsibility **Pokes Loki-kun** Also loved the Miko bit! Truly inspired, that! I read it and I was like "Oh! Of course! THAT'S why she's there!" You have now added a whole new fannon interpretation that might even be canon, as only you with your wonderfully conveluted mind can! (and I hope you take that as the compliment it was intended to be, my brain doesn't work this early in the morning) Amaya the sleepy kitsune |