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Reviews For: Snakes and Ladders

Haru no hana
2007-12-15
ch 1,
abusei will
look for
the "continuations" XD

kisus
Zarz
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseMayura as Loki's miko makes so much sense when you put it that way! I love Yamino's attempts to explain things to Mayura as well. This is a very cool next installment of Learned to See! I love how you've moved the story along!
Draculina17
2006-09-13
ch 1,
abuseLoved it!
winterflower
2006-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abusehehe, i can't believe that yamino want to get all this after he helps mayura with her problems
Yami-chan and Unrealistic
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was great! Me likey Yamino!!
Unseen Watcher
2005-02-18
ch 1,
abusehmm. This is turning into a really interesting Round Robin. Very nice. I hope it continues (and I can find it all).
sushi girl
2005-02-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMG! i love you, i love your fic. i love yamino. espically yamino. ^^. yay. there just arent enough fics with yamino in them. thank you thank you thankyou. !
LittleGreenWolf
2004-06-01
ch 1,
abuseThank you so much for continuing the original story. I really enjoyed it a lot, and you're continuation was just as enjoyable, and really sweet. I only wish for more. T.T

And really good revelation there with Mayura. I never noticed it before. @.@ So many new fanfiction possibilities there. New chapter possibilities there. *hint, hint* Please continue if you can.
Quidditchbitch
2003-10-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou really SHOULD write more. *pouts* PLEASE?!?!?!?! I like this so much.
Mystic
2003-10-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseFinally I can review this! Fanfiction.net was having problems (as usual). I love this story and you pulled in many elements that most people wouldn't consider. Mayura may be a mystery freak but I believe each of us claims to want a bit more excitement and yet when it comes none of us are really sure what to do when it happens. I believe you captured this very nicely! Keep writing!
Psycho-CJ
2003-10-14
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was pretty cool. Loki, you coward. I definitely think Yamino deserves all that stuff. That part about Mayura being a miko and all was pretty interesting, I never thought of it that way, but it makes a lot of sense. I wonder how Loki is going to explain about what he is about how he is Yamino's and Fenrir father. Good job!
Amaya Shinkuyoake
2003-10-14
ch 1,
abuse**laughs** I just love the way you write Yamino... makes it so I can totally sympathyze with his situation in having to !explain! to Mayura which really should be somebody else's responsibility

**Pokes Loki-kun**

Also loved the Miko bit! Truly inspired, that! I read it and I was like "Oh! Of course! THAT'S why she's there!" You have now added a whole new fannon interpretation that might even be canon, as only you with your wonderfully conveluted mind can! (and I hope you take that as the compliment it was intended to be, my brain doesn't work this early in the morning)

Amaya the sleepy kitsune
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