 Sakura Snape-Malfoy 2009-03-28 . chapter 10I noticed that it's been a while since you've updated this story.
Do the others go in after Harry? Does Severus want to start disecting the basilisk right then? Do they finally figure out what the riddle means? How long will it take to actually find the cure or are they close? Will it matter how long they've been mentally ill? Will they use it on Lockhart as well as Ron and the Longbottoms? Will Harry and Severus finally admit to how they feel for each other?
I await your next chapter and hopes that it will come soon. |
 Lain Marie 2007-09-23 . chapter 10This is so good, i love this story. i can't wait to read more. |
 fahzzyquill 2007-08-30 . chapter 9alright so why did u stop writing this story? it's amazing. i have to review this chapter because I alrady reviewed chapter 10. i really wish you'd write this again. it's amazing! |
 fahzzyquill 2006-08-07 . chapter 10so good. update soon. |
 GooglePest 2006-06-01 . chapter 10 Such a good story...Keep writing! Immediamente! |
 Mystery Reviewer 2006-02-07 . chapter 10Oh, what a horrible, horrible cliffhanger! I do enjoy this story very much, I cannot wait for the next chapter! I love how you have the slight fluff mixed in with real plot, making it much more interesting than pure fluff. ^^ |
 animeangel088 2006-01-16 . chapter 10good fic. |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 10It is nice to see that Severus' views of Harry are changing - rather quickly I might add. :o) |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 9WooWoo!! Sexual tension building!! *g* |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 8Hahaha! They are so blind!! Not to mentions suspicious!! |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 7Ha Ha!! *grins evilly* Go, Dray, go on with that calculating, evil mind of yours :o) Haha I know I would be in Slytherin - I have a quick mind and am always thinking - and like Sev, sometimes lose sleep because of it! |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 6Well, I have decided that I will stop making mechanical suggestions since I do not know whether or not it offends you, so if you want my help, you already know how to contact me. I will focus on the plot from here on out...
I have to say: Argh! Stupid Sev! *chuckle* The thick headed, self-demeaning bastard that he is, needs to take some action rather than sitting back and watching his dreams disappear. You and I both know the relationship between Draco and Harry is not what he thinks - one would think he would have learned to double check things by now... especially in his profession. |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 5Okay, an bit more mechanical help: in the sentence, It was still Snape's face, it should be Severus' face, Harry knows he has feelings for him after all, it would be more personal. Also, blonde is used when referring to a woman drop the e when refering to a man; I know most if not all word processor spell checks will say this is wrong, but it is not. You can always click 'Add to Dictionary'.
Haha! I knew Sev would be jealous! Poor Harry is so embarassed I think, because he doesn't know that his feelings are reciprocated! |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 4*chuckle* Not all that many problems mechanically here. Hmm... Draco in the same bed with Harry - I bet Sev will be jealous!! |
 Glitchie 2006-01-08 . chapter 3*lol* Looks like you are like me and type to fast at times - I saw one name with a letter missing. Fragments are still there, and you do not need *flashback* and *End Flashback*. As long as the font face is in italics and the non-flashback text is mostly normal, it can be assumed that there is a flashback - there are more rules than that to flashbacks though, but I do not think for the purposes of fan fic that they are important here. If you really want to know what they are, you can email me through my site.
As for Sev, I can relate to his uncertainty. I am not one for comforting or protecting one either, and he reacted just as I would I think. When I do decide to protect someone, I feel as though I am lost, that I am not myself. |