 anon 2009-05-09 . chapter 2 Reread this again just now. Was wondering if there was any chance for more? |
 Nachoman1 2009-04-30 . chapter 2Okay, so Ranma, 20 years old, lives in Juuban (although he commutes daily to Nerima), where he has been monitoring the Senshi without interfering.
Reason: last thing he wants is to get any more fiancees.
Thing is, after Neherenia, some real demons attack. By the time he notices things aren't being as silly as usual, only Pluto remains alive. He saves her while he also accidentally manages to key the Time Key to himself.
The first half of the second chapter is basically a retelling from Pluto's point of view, where we see that, while she could still go back to the Gate, the Gate in no longer hers. The second half is Nabiki convincing Ranma to take a secret identity.
I didn't quite understand where did the girl attacked by ninjas mesh with the story at large, other than to make another excuse for Nabiki to convince Ranma about the need for a secret identity. Another potential plot hole is about Pluto just managing to get to the Gates without using the staff, even though you already tried to explain that as 'residual charge'.
Anyway, I'll keep reading. |
 Slade2.0 2009-03-03 . chapter 2I love how you had almost all the saliors scouts killed off like they wer nothing. but htenagain the ARE nothing. they got there asses handed to them CONSTANTLY in the series. though maybe you COULD have kept them alive if only to have Ranma, the superior warrio, simply use them as meat shields.
sailor Senshi: Ow!. can we stopnow!?!
Ranma: NO! Continue with operation Meat Shield! |
 avatoa 2008-08-27 . chapter 2Please update this story for it needs more action. Oh and one more thing. Why the hell did you kill nearly all of the Sailor Senshi and not have fix it by going back in time to stop it? |
 DeltaKyuubi 2008-07-28 . chapter 2cool story cant wait till you update |
 wolf40k 2008-06-09 . chapter 2I was thinking about this story earlyer today and desidded to try and find it.
Considering that I haven't read it scince it was last updated, that should be a clue to you how mush of a good thing you have going. Don't let this story die.
After all, this world needs "THE GUARDIAN!"
LOL |
 Lerris 2008-05-21 . chapter 2This is quite good. Now if only it had more chapters... |
 inevitable 2008-05-01 . chapter 2What! The sailor scouts have been eliminated. Ranma has his job cut out for him. I wonder how the events will turn out. Hope you update soon. |
 SilentHypoCrit 2007-12-21 . chapter 2Published 2003 updated 2007? Wow.
And it also is a nice and fun story. Set up (especially for Ranma to get out of Nerima) is not the peak of creativity (but than it has been done a zilliont times)
Otherwise nice Idea and nice writing. But too short for now to really see where this is going. |
 Sdarian 2007-09-12 . chapter 2This is a good start. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work! |
 harry shall rise 2007-09-11 . chapter 2love the story, update soon. |
 Mysticalflame 2007-09-01 . chapter 2Nabiki has her reasons, eh? Pattenting superhero figurines and posters wouldn't have anything to do with it, I'm sure.
She's going to get filthy rich if she plays her cards right. ^.^
But that girl that Ranma rescued is going to cause Ranma and Nabiki problems. She just might be able to figure things out. :P
Lata! |
 Sopchoppy 2007-08-13 . chapter 2Interesting, looking forward to more. |
 chm01 2007-07-08 . chapter 2looks great but i wonder killing all the senshi was neccesary(not questioning it just asking) |
 Kuro-no-Tsubasa 2007-06-25 . chapter 2great work! keep up the good work |