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Tylec Asroc 7/29/04 . chapter 2I'll pass on the yaoi, but I would love to read some more poetry. A Kaiba poem, maybe? Pleze? |
Tylec Asroc 7/29/04 . chapter 1Wow! Now this I like! I've looked through a few of your "Pokey and School" stories, but poetry definetly seems to be your strong element. Lovely rhyming and imagery so real you shiver. The last stanza sounds like a call to war: "Your old Pharoh's burning / It's time you felt the heat!" Wonderfully written! Drop the stories, but never drop the pen. Keep writing! |
eclipsewolf 6/4/04 . chapter 2 PLEZE DO A MARIK/YAMI! PLEZE! I ABSOLUTLY CANNOT FIND ANY GOOD MARIK/YAMI STORIES! So if you do that I will be happy beyond belief (no, not rape, actual LOVE shared by both). Thanks! |
Kesso-chan 1/18/04 . chapter 2Kesso: oohh! Marik/Seto! And Malik! And Ryou! And Yami! And Bakura! And... ... ... ME! ... Wait I'm a female! Never mind! All: *Anime fall and sweatdrop* Kesso: _ |
Box Persona 1/17/04 . chapter 2Satah: MARIK/YAMI! Yami Yugi-ette: _O! Satah: ... -ETTE! O_O *runs away* |
Box Persona 10/15/03 . chapter 1Boxey: _ woah... ... ... YAY Yami Yugi-ette: Burn *twitch* Boxey: *blink* Yami Yugi-ette: |
Kesso-chan 10/15/03 . chapter 1Kesso: *gaspeth!* THIS IS SO GOOD, KUPO-CHAN! *dies from the awesome-ness* |
kasumi 10/14/03 . chapter 1 oh i like! is that supose to be a yaoi? well if not, make one! |