|Reviews for Origin|
| Tylec Asroc 7/29/04 . chapter 2
I'll pass on the yaoi, but I would love to read some more poetry. A Kaiba poem, maybe? Pleze?
| Tylec Asroc 7/29/04 . chapter 1
Wow! Now this I like! I've looked through a few of your "Pokey and School" stories, but poetry definetly seems to be your strong element. Lovely rhyming and imagery so real you shiver. The last stanza sounds like a call to war: "Your old Pharoh's burning / It's time you felt the heat!" Wonderfully written!
Drop the stories, but never drop the pen. Keep writing!
| eclipsewolf 6/4/04 . chapter 2
PLEZE DO A MARIK/YAMI! PLEZE! I ABSOLUTLY CANNOT FIND ANY GOOD MARIK/YAMI STORIES! So if you do that I will be happy beyond belief (no, not rape, actual LOVE shared by both). Thanks!
| Kesso-chan 1/18/04 . chapter 2
Kesso: oohh! Marik/Seto! And Malik! And Ryou! And Yami! And Bakura! And... ... ... ME! ... Wait I'm a female! Never mind!
All: *Anime fall and sweatdrop*
| Box Persona 1/17/04 . chapter 2
Yami Yugi-ette: _O!
Satah: ... -ETTE! O_O *runs away*
| Box Persona 10/15/03 . chapter 1
Boxey: _ woah... ... ... YAY
Yami Yugi-ette: Burn *twitch*
| Kesso-chan 10/15/03 . chapter 1
Kesso: *gaspeth!* THIS IS SO GOOD, KUPO-CHAN! *dies from the awesome-ness*
| kasumi 10/14/03 . chapter 1
oh i like! is that supose to be a yaoi? well if not, make one!