You should have listened to your editor:
"I think it needs more explosions...and a duck."

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In case anyone is confused yet, TSF06 and I are buds, and I actually helped him write this story. Try not to worry, as I'm just giving him grief. He's put together a pretty good fic here. Of course, it goes without saying that, had he taken all my advice (including the duck), it would have been a FAN-F*-TASTIC fic. But such is life, I suppose.

Chapters? I've sh*tt*d longer chapters than all three of your stories combined!

An interesting mix of post-modern (by which I mean future) setting and emotional regression within the character Jet. But I think it would have been cooler if you had made his arm turn into a rotary chain cannon of death...or a chaining rotary death cannon...or a rotating death cannon chain...