Earendil: V. good! I liked how you connected the end to the beginning, and made it a whole story instead of a string of random events, like *some* stories.
Foilist: Hey! Randomness is awesome! And It's OK but make it funnier.
Earendil: Whatever.
Foilist: HYPER!
--The Arwen Police

Great! Very well-written and entertaining! :D

clever little story, well-written and plausible.

LOL Erin, you know I don't watch Daria...but so what!?! I loved it...lol your craziness + the plot = AWESOME! I have no idea who this TED kid is but I assume he likes gum...MHWHAHAHA! What's a Morgendorffer? Sorry...I'm Germanly disabled. I LOVE DOUBLEMINT GUM. THIS TOM DUDE IS MY SOULMATE.
Okay...now I know about the nuts...b/c I was like...macadamia (sp) nuts...hm...lol :P. LOL This Tom dude rocks! Gilligan's Island is awesome...I love the Skipper...but I love the sexy millionaire...JOKING. Naw but Gilligan's awesome. I assume this Kevin is a dumb donkey...hehe! I should try sticking my head in a nut bin...but anyway...I don't get the filbert part. SRY :(. LOL THAT IS SO CUTE! The sign...does it really say that in the show? It's so lame...it's funny! I hate it when things do that...puns...AGH! But it's funny you put that in there! Great job! It's sets the mood of a super lame store...that AND it's name. Nutty. You've gotta write a sequel! Or we'll NEVER find out who stole the gum! ;)!

P.S. A young, eager writer...yep that's you Erin. So young...so naive...we all know you're five years old...;)

P.P.S. WHERE'S HP! MOONLIGHT! MIDNIGHT! SOMETHING LIKE THAT! I CAN'T FIND IT! AAGH! MADNESS!

P.P.P.S. It's a Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty, Nutty World!

It's still fab, Mahna! Great and substance-y!

~cheers~ Another great story by the wonderful Mahna Mahna! I loved this one when I first read it and I love it now. Can wait for your next story!

A fun little fic from an eager, young author. Welcome to the seedy counterculture of Daria fanfiction, Mahna Mahna.

Other than one tiny nitpick (Tom jumped to the conclusion that Jane's gum was stolen MUCH too quickly), I can see nothing wrong with this fic.

A good solid first attempt.

Three and a half stars.