aw write some more!

Beautiful. I could really imagine the scene. You're right, the manga shows an evolution of Miroku and his interraction with Sango; such a romantic and silent couple! You show it so nicely! Thanks!

very sweet, very subtle!

I have got to get my hands on some of those Manga, the stories have just enough differences and I want to learn what they are, to bad I'm poor. In the mean time readin fanfiction such as this one helps people like me to understand the characters much better. I think you did a good job of exploring the relationship between Miroku and Sango, as well as seeing much more of Miroku himself.

A good job with description as well.

~QueenTatooine

Aw...A nice look into Miroku's deepest thoughts about Sango. I know it sucks in the anime that he keeps being a lecher and gropes her. I guess the writers did that for comedy purposes or something. well at least I know that in the manga he stops. :) Actually, I really do think that's what Miroku thinks about, even in the anime. I love your short little vignette... the way you wrote was very nice. Well, keep writing!! :)

Beautiful! Just... beautiful! I'm terrible at writing from the first-person view, especially Miroku's (despite the fact that he's my favorite character), but, man you really pulled it off. I never considered his actions in the way you described before, nor did I notice that he'd completely stopped flirting with women (though he does still rub her butt occasionally). I'd always sort of thought that, no matter what happened, Miroku's curse would always take first priority, which was why he didn't allow himself to get close to Sango. But, here, in this fic, where he does let himself, in spite of what his rational mind tells him... amazing. And your wonderful portrayal of his feelings and thoughts only add to the enjoyment of the fic. There should definetely be more M/S stories like this out there. Nice going!

That was wonderful! I'm glad somebody decided to expand on that bit of Miroku changing in the storyline. Stupid anime... *kicks it* The way you analyzed everything is exactly the way I would. Or, at least, would like to, since I'm fairly certain there is no way I could write this well. Anyway, fantastic fic! I loved it!

Cool. I liked it. Thanks.

I actually haven't seen that far into the show...how frustrating. I want to see the damn proposal!
But I'm so lazy and the only reason I've even seen up to episode 120 is because other people have been giving me their cds...
Yeah. Very good job on this. I like how he hardly talks to her, and this line: Perhaps I actually underestimated my own charm. I can be quite enticing at times.
It's so Miroku :P

Beautiful... *sniffs*

Hey Spectrum! This is Principessa.
I love this fic! It's so sweet and the writing is very lyrical. It gives such a peaceful feeling... you are an amazing writer!

that was unbelievably perfect.

first thing: i LOVE Dave Matthew's Band! THEY R SO AWESOME! my older brother listens 2 them too. second thing: i luv inuyasha but Miroku and Sango are my all-time favorites. well, actually its Miroku cuz he's my dream man (i actually could care less of his ecchi lecherous ways...^^;)
third thing: not many writers i kno hav good grammar skills but u hav great grammar skills!
fourth thing: that would've been cool if there were more chapters on here. maybe there is, but my computer isnt showing it up...dang computer! oh i write S&M fan fics so if u want 2 check them out, feel free! i only hav 2 & one of them already has 10 chapters. i almost killed myself w. it & i am kinda sad that not many people reviewed it cuz i had an old one w. IY & K that was 12 chapters long & i had 30+ reviews & it deleted from my computer & ff.net took it off which made me very upset. but anyways, this is awesome!! FYI i luv anime too!

This was totally beautiful. I haven't read a story like this from Miroku's perspective at all. It's definetly beautiful! I loved it! Fantastic job!

I love this. Almost makes me forgot about pointless and stupid filler episodes that have Miroku doing things he shouldn't be doing, and bascially ruining all that is great about his proposal in the first place..*sigh* Okay maybe I can't forget filler, but anyway great look into Mirkou's character. Why can't the anime do this? Great job. :)