 spiralgal 2009-01-29 . chapter 4Hmm. Hiei is so funny! And the absolute lack of knowledge of the koorimes is funny too. Wonder what will happen next? |
 Dragos-serenity 2008-07-31 . chapter 4*practically dies laughing* OMG you have to write more, it is so funny! I look forward to an update. |
 Adversaria 2007-10-12 . chapter 4my god! this fic is f*ing brilliant! please do continue soon! |
 Lil Blue J 2007-10-07 . chapter 4OMG, that was rich!
And you're right, your idea is really original and amusing, I can't wait to find out what happens next. The beginning was a little confusing to me at first, but I understood what happened and your writing style flows very well. |
 daiyu amaya 2007-10-05 . chapter 4wha! What the world... What's up with this? I'm so confused... |
 Anomura the Padawan 2007-09-19 . chapter 4Has it really only been seven months since you updated? It feels like so much longer... Please update this soon! |
 Kuro Tenka 2007-08-29 . chapter 4I think I laughed as hard as Kurama when Hiei gave his explanation for sex. ~ Kuro |
 Kyu-kyu 2007-06-12 . chapter 4 Some author hate being nagged. But since you asked for it...
I just found this story and I think it's fantastic! I hope you will update soon ^_^ |
 hannah 2007-06-02 . chapter 4 "It's not hard or sharp, so stabbing won't work."
GYAHAHAHAHAHA i can TOTALLY understand kurama's reaction!! haha, that was PRICELESS and this fic is so awesome because somehow, even with Hiei as a stubborn prude (if you can even call it that), he's still very well in character. hahahaha, can't stop laughing... |
 ShibuNoNeko 2007-04-12 . chapter 4I simply just love this story. It's so very well written and Hiei is so cute and innocent. I like the plot I havn't read anything like this before. Keep it up and update soon. |
 DemonUntilDeath 2007-03-10 . chapter 4I'm so glad you continued this story, it really is an interesting plot line. I loved the bit about Hiei "describing" sex. Hillarious. Great job, keep up the awesome work! |
 BlueUtopiah 2007-03-06 . chapter 1You know, I've kind of been lurking and admiring your talent from afar but this story so completely blew my mind that I had to get some guts and speak to you.
I love this. The whole thing. From the fact that Kurama is from the future, to the explanation of the Jagan, to the collar, to the basic interaction between the two. This is an incredbily fresh idea on the pairing and the concept of slave and mpreg.
Did I understand correctly that you have this written out but you need to type up the chapters? Because I'd love to see more of this.
And I love your site. I enjoy your AMVs tremedously (Dark Half is incredible) and I also love Setting The Rules and Insatiable. I've read them over and over and added them to my recommended fanfic list over on LiveJournal. You're an incredible asset to the fandom, I hope you keep writing. |
 Silvermane1 2007-03-03 . chapter 4cool |
 moonruins 2007-02-24 . chapter 4 OH, wow, I can't believe the fourth chapter is finally here! That wasn't meant to be a shot, or anything; it's just that I randomly check this story to see if you've updated and I almost missed the fact that you had. I was shocked, but very excited. This chapter, I have to say, didn't turn out anyway like I thought it might, but I had let myself get carried away with dramatics. Instead, it brought me back to when I was reading the first few chapters: very realistic development for these circumstances. I can't wait for a fifth chapter, and I think I can be more patient now that I can believe you didn't really abadon this. |
 Ramen 2007-02-20 . chapter 4You stop just before bathtime?! Too cruel! Though the cute image of this particular version of Hiei is so endearing that all I can imagine is bubbles... ^_^; So adorable!
On a side note just given the subject matter, you might want to nump this up to T rating. But I've never been a good judge on that anyway.
Love your work! Don't keep us waiting too long! Please? |