Ooh! Cliffhanger! I hate cliffhangers! Please update SOON! It's really good, I love the plot.

OMYGAWD! i love kel neal! And i'm withya on the whole Dom and Yuki die die die thing! GO KELNEAL!ommg they are made for each other i love that pairing

so awesome. so... how DOES Kel get out of this one?? how?? please? i just got my account, and im going to be EVIL with cliffhangers. if u like Harry Potter, u mite be interested in my story. i'll be starting it soon. but update? please? triple fudge brownies will work as a good bribe rite? rite??

OMG, please update really soon- I love Kel/Neal stories, and this one is pretty good.

Lady Mage,formerly known as magewhisperer

omg! that was so good. why did you have to seave it hanging like that? i'll be checkin in on this story to see if you wrote anymore.

you say weekly updates and yet you haven't updated since 2003...bad bad person award...but very good story i must say

UPDATE! please i beg of u to update!

Nice Promise So glad you kept it.

Sorry if my bad mood is rubbing off had a bad day.

Luv Ya,

Miss Screwed Up

Great, I love Neal! Could you write more then PG ships? This is really good, but it's not very fun to write less then PG-13 or R fanfics, they ARE really fun to read and write. You can put the characters into fun akward situations.

~Rin

OH!WRITE MORE!

Weekly and even sometimes DAILY updates huh? So, where are they? I want an update! Please?

Much beter paragraphs this chapter. hehe, I'm slow because I asked you to update but there was more chapters! Silly me. Off I go to read more

Great, great story..BUT what is with your paragraphs?!?! As in, you don't have any! You need to take a new paragraph each time the person talking changes at least! Aoart from that, it's...well great! Update soon!

THis is so good! i know your not likely to update cause you haven't in like half a year, but... i live in hope!! anyway GREAT WORK!

what happened to weekly and maybe daily updates?? you can NOT leave it like that and not come back! you didnt even get to the good parts where neal and kel are actually together, instead of just obsessing over eachother. although obsessing is good. curse it all! you desparately need to update!