Ineresting take on it! Very nicely done.

I like the discription, very nice.

Wow. Very dark. This allowed a glimpse for me into the mind of the great Potter. What must that feel like? I liked how you put it: "You knew what it was, yet unlike those monsters you feared as a child, it did not go away once you understood." When I understand things, though they may spook me a little, I don't let them take effect - but this one isn't going to budge. In fact, it's almost as though the knowledge of it makes it worse. You understand the horror that awaits. But again, now he's armed with knowledge. I loved the image of the candle, the Dark breath. You are very talented, and this is well done.

~Bobbin, a little spooked

This was really, really wonderful. Chilling, and poignant and dark and, well, dark.

I loved it.

The only thing wrong is that it's too darned short!

You really, really know how to set a mood and run with it.

Great job!

very good

Wow, that was really deep. But i understand what you wrote and was touched by it. It was beautiful and intence and horrifying at the same time. Very good job!

elle

Wow. Great story. Well put together. I hope that you would write more.

This is a wonderful work of literature! I am absolutely delighted to find that there are authors here who can write decent, wonderful, amazing, indepth (ect. ^^) stories!

oh, how creepy and deep! keep writing!
(it's in 2nd person perspective with us in Harry's shoes, right?)