Reviews for Sudden Burst of Speed

Reviews For: Sudden Burst of Speed - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

Olaf74 2008-08-14 ch 1,	abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
Zarz 2007-08-07 ch 5,	abuseHonestly, I wasn't sure what to make of a Ranma/Flash crossover, but it turned out wonderfully! I love what Ranma's learned and found out, and a lot of the information about the Flashes was new to me too, as I haven't been that interested in them before; I think that's going to change. Really great story, and I love your portrayal of Ranma's abilities. I'd love to see a sequel with Batman, just please don't make him too much of an stubborn idiot - I think he's a good person at heart, he's just had one too many traumatic experiences. Perhaps the Robins would be enough to knock some sense into him. I also can't wait to find out what else Ranma learned when he was in the Speed Force. A scene with him spending the quarter of a second to run to Japan to tell his pop exactly what he thinks about his childhood was also be really great to see. Keep up the wonderful work!
TegwenielWestwind 2006-12-20 ch 1,	abuseOh, you wrote more to speed force! Yaay. cough Okay, so I forgot to check recently. Anyway, thanks for writing this cool crossover.
cyran 2006-09-14 ch 5, anon.	abuseJust finished reading this story...I realize that its kind of obvious considering I'm making the comment at the last chapter. But I degress, just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it and would be intrested in reading a continuation - if you ever get the desire or need to write another story arc that is. Although if you don't have the drive to make more stories based off of it that's completely understandable. As a side note, I've read through what you've done with Prime Attitude...and I think some of Golden Opportunity although that was probably two or three years ago. I'll have to read through it again later as well as some of your other works. I also would like to commend your writing skills; it gets irritating hunting for fanfiction, finding interesting ideas that some authors come up with only to be unable to read it due to the writing/grammar level being rudimentary. Thanks for writing, I know that I'll keep reading.
kwangmablade 2006-08-01 ch 4,	abuseExcellent fic and I cant wait to see what happens next
Peter Kim 2006-05-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseThis is a great fic,will some of the events of DC will happen here like the Batman forced to leave the Justice League temporay,the alternate version of Lex will merge the universes together,the disbanding of the Young Justice and the Justice League,destruction of the speed force,Lex Luthor losing Lex Corps, superman losing his powers and attacking Lex in the newspaper as Clark and more?
Jamez 2006-05-08 ch 5, anon.	abuseGreat story, it took me a while to come back to it and finish this last chapter, but now I'm glad I waited. It was worthwhile, and though there are a few loose-ends, it doesn't matter. This was a great fic, and I hope some day the muse returns to you in order to continue this. For the meanwhile, take your time and enjoy working on other things, be it more stories or just living your life. Just keep up the great work later and take your time doing it.
Sir-Tannin 2006-04-11 ch 5,	abuseare you ever going to do a sequal?
Kai Namikaze 2006-02-08 ch 5,	abuseit was great! you should make a sequel to this story
d 2006-01-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseAkalon's idea of Ranma working with the titans in a possible sequel or even brand new story sounds interesting. Especially since they showed the series final episode friday.
sadfru 2006-01-02 ch 5,	abuseI really enjoyed this story not only for the plot but the fact that you added the theory and specific talents of the speed force, somehing I've tried to look up every now and agian only to find breadcrumbs (pieces) he and there. Wouldn't mind seeing how this ranma wild react to the continuity of Ranma 1/2, wouldn't mind seeing you do an evil or semi evil ranma either
Dumbledore 2005-12-25 ch 5,	abuseHi, I found your story exciting and interesting to read. The concept of merging Ranma into alternate universes has been done before, but I don't think I have seen one with the Flash. Kudos on finding a unique angle! In your profile, you say that few people bother to review your stories and this has discouraged you from writing more, as well as decreased drive. There is nothing I can do about the drive issue, but I hope my review helps rekindle the writing spirit. What I liked most about this story was the way you introduced new characters to Ranma in a rational way, that is often times lacking in stories by novice writers. By rational, I mean that the reaction to meeting someone new is realistic in how they develop a relationship over time, and it was founded on rational concepts like mutual respect. Furthermore, you made the characters warm and likable in the case of the heros, and evil and disenchanting for the villains. It was especially nice to see the transformation of Edward the diabolical grandfather into an outright insane villain... it was very well done! My only qualm is that the characters were unidimensional for the most part, having very little depth. The characters of Wally and Charlie were exceptions, though they weren't featured very much, and so was Ranma. You can improve this in future stories, I'm sure. Another thing that I liked about this story was the pace and plot progression. The process of learning how to use new powers is one that is very easily butchered by having it go too fast without detail or too slow with more nitpicky detail than necessary. You did a good job with writing about the training and how it helped without losing touch with the storyline. It was also key that you kept us interested in the greater story line by interjecting scenes from the villain's point of view and minor fight scenes (like the mall robbery). A third thing I liked about your story is the way you introduced the world of the Flash to novices. I have never read a comic of the Flash, but I was able to grasp the concept (I know its not that difficult, but still...) of how the universe worked. You did a terrific job going over things that long time fans of the Flash comic would take for granted and not elaborate on. It really helps to have that when getting into the story and not having the background. Lastly, I appreciate the way you weren't afraid to use the deux ex machina of the speed force to explain away possible problems. For example, having Ranma forget his past enough so that he wouldn't go rushing back was a good idea. Numerous authors have the main character fully aware of ditching their close ones yet persist in writing that they go away willingly to sequester themselves off for long periods. It's a small thing, and like numerous other small things that I have not mentioned, it really helps make the story work smoothly. Keep up the great writing! I hope to see a sequel to this, or other novel spins on the Ranma universe!
Ghost in the Machine 2005-12-17 ch 5,	abuseMaking Ranma the most powerful speedster on the planet, despite his lack of experience, seems a little bit over the top. The comments about Batman's pyschological problems would have been prophetic if this story had been released before the current 'Infinite Crisis' storyline in DC Comics, but come across as unneccesary here. A few syllabobbles that could have been avoided. Overall, not quite as strong an ending as I'd hoped for, but a pretty good story none the less.
Dreamlight 2005-12-13 ch 5,	abuseGreat job! I'm glad you finally updated (Like I have room to talk, lol) as I liked this story from the beginning. I'm pleased with the ending and hope to see a sequal in the near future.
BTB 2005-12-11 ch 5,	abuseIt's been a while for this one hasn't it? Very nice touch to have Ranma send the villain to a one way trip to eternity without killing him. A pity you deem to have ended this one. Though what Nerima will have to say about the new version of Ranma I don't even want to think. Keep up th egood work. I enjoy reading your stories.

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