Confusing. Amaxing, but so confusing...

wow, that's amazing. The flashbacks were perfect and creepy, and you got down all of Duo's diffrenet facets exactly. Kudos to you.
Later

And another disturbingly realistic fic. You really are very very talented at this. Your writing has incredible (i use that word too much. It's the only way to describe you) depth.

All I can say is that was deep and great. Just deep and great.

After reading, I was like:

...aww.

Very very nice. :) Kudos.

This was actually a little confusing. I couldn't tell if Duo was dead at the beginning, died somewhere in the middle, or was only dead in a symbolic sort of way.

Heavy stuff. I like the repetition between each of the sections. You have an awesome and powerful style of writing.

..Wow..