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litlestamazon
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
That was really nice thank you :)

I would suggest having someone give it a once over. Though it is near perfect there are one or two places it could be smoothed out.

"It feels like I've dropped a ton in training weights..." I think "in" should be 'of.'

Also when Lee says, '"I'll always be there when you are in a pinch."' I would suggest using a contraction instead.

Obviously this is great without tweaking but they are just little things that I noticed.

Thanks for this lovely fic :)
-delicate.desires
2009-02-21 . chapter 1
Cute story, very sad though, for Lee.
sadbird
2008-03-14 . chapter 1
...I can't believe nobody reviewed your writings, hm. Because i think it's a really wonderful piece. haha, I hope you continue writing such stuff ^^ it was beautiful
YourAngelStandingBy
2007-06-15 . chapter 1
Aw, that sounds like stuff Lee would say. I love the way you portrayed him here.

-Angel

PS: Sasuke... gr...
Illucida
2006-08-07 . chapter 1
this was good
kusuri
2006-04-05 . chapter 1
This was heart wrenching.I really liked this fic.I'm a big fan of Rock Lee and Sakura.Great job on this.They were both really in character.
deliciouscake
2005-11-19 . chapter 1
wow i loved this a lot :) i think you captured lee nicely.
Nuklear Firefly
2005-04-23 . chapter 1
Been a while since you got a review for this, huh? Well, I couldn't just leave this without commenting, so... BRILLIANCE. This was just so Lee. So mind-numbingly sweet, selfless, and... aw. I just love it. Brilliant job, luv. Keep up the great work.
denimjo
2004-07-21 . chapter 1
Gotta agree with everyone else; this is very well-written, and it doesn't even stray one bit OOC for either Lee or Sakura. I appreciate stories like that, LeeSaku being my fave couple in Naruto. Please keep up the excellent writing.
weirddramagirl
2004-06-28 . chapter 1
this was very sweet, nice job. I love SakuLee!
Stella Bomb
2004-06-08 . chapter 1
Awesome story! I'm a self-proclaimed SasuSaku fan, but this story was wonderful. Convincingly written from Lee's point of view. I
Midnight Crow
2003-11-21 . chapter 1
I just had to review this, because they're right: you're not receiving the reviews you're supposed to get. I spent the whole day reading and of all of the Naruto fics here, yours is the only one who merited a review from me.

You captured Lee's thoughts so well. When he compared Sakura to an angel, and his belief in the "nice-guy" pose... ^_^

It's short, but easily understood and cute. Very close to the light feeling of the manga, and none of that sap. @_@

I still haven't decided myself who I think should Sakura be with...but that's beside the point. This fic is good. ^_^
Silky-Keno
2003-10-19 . chapter 1
AW KAWAII!
Curlybear
2003-10-18 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD! that was so cute! I loved it! Lee is so caring! I really like Lee, he is so sweet! please write a story soon about the two of them!

Fruit-tea1
2003-10-17 . chapter 1
OMG!! How wonderful romantic thought on Lee!!
this is really warm and romantic feelings fic !!His love for Sakura ( that u wrote) is adorable!! how a great man he is!! U very very well written on Lee's feelings! very romantic!! indeed! Great work even though just one shot...!
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