 BrilliantCrescentStar 2003-11-09 . chapter 3This ficlet thing sounds pretty interesting... why the hell did you just stick with the Shang Oyster? Even a title like the Shang Puppy Dog or the Shang Canary sounds more deadly. Funnily enough,the Shang Oyster part was the reason I tuned in. |
 an anonymous geek 2003-11-03 . chapter 3I'm so sorry I havent responded to this sooner. My computer, being the retarded piece of crap that it is, didnt inform me when you updated this story.
THANK YOU SO MUCH! I love it.
me and neal. ah, that's how its meant to be!
~Kristin |
 igloobear 2003-10-24 . chapter 3 hahaha! the Shang OYSTER! that's hilarious!
sorry. it all just got away from me. but that's funny! How about Shang Tomato? |
 LoneEagle13 2003-10-24 . chapter 3Awesome story. Just to tell you, I'm still waiting for you to post mine. The one About Jonathan of Keraise. Try to make these stories a bit more flowing though. The entire bit about King Jon was a bit far fetched. |
 Lady Lorene 2003-10-21 . chapter 3I love them. Both were very funny. :) I can't wait until you put the next one up. Bye! |
 an anonymous geek 2003-10-20 . chapter 2aaw, that was so cute!
I'm next?! OMIGOSH!
EXCITEMENT!
I'm gunna explode!
~Kristin |
 LoneEagle13 2003-10-19 . chapter 1 Name: Jonathan of Keraise (Nickname Talon)
Location: Set in Kel's time, but with another girl page named Jessica of Appalaise, Talon will be a page as well, same year as Kel
Description of Looks: Longish black hair, Tan, Tall, Muscular, Strong chin, Green Eyes(No, I do not want him to Look like Harry Potter)
Description of Personality: Quiet, intelligent, keeps to himself, shy when he meets new people but he doesn't show it, you know, the strong, silent type.
Gift: Navy blue with little pinpoints of white light, like stars. His gift could rival Numair's if Talon was trained properly, Which I hope he will
Love Interest: Kel, but he has to be taller than her throughout the entire fic.
How to (erhm) dispose of a significant other: I don't think Kel has one in the first two books. No wait, Neal. Oh just make Kel like Talon instead.
Occupation: Page. Really wants to be a knight. Similar to Kel, as in he cares for Common people. Make him like Protector of the Small II.
Anything Else: I made Talon up, just to tell you. He should have a grudge against his father that he doesn't want to have because his father was really strict and didn't care about the commoners on their fief. He should be the first born son and should have a younger brother. The younger brother adores him. I think I should leave a little room for you to write your Ideas in so I'll stop. :) |
 Destria 2003-10-18 . chapter 2 *giggles* THANKY! hehehe, it was pretty goo. SOme fo the aprts coulda been changed, but i' fer me! well, actually fer you, but oh well! |
 Liams Kitten 2003-10-18 . chapter 1w00t another story I can invade! I just love these things...
Name: Hazel Higgins (I be a commoner)
Locationn: During Lioness Rampant ::nods::
Description of Looks: Umm...shoulder length dark-brown curly hair. Blue eye (almost Elijah Wood blue but not quite...I've said that for EVERY story so far, lol). Only one eye. The left one has a burlap patch over it.
Description of Personality: (damn, I'm gonna have to be creative with this, I can't remember anything) I'm sort of shy around people, but once you get to know me I'm quite the chatterbox...I have an immensly short temper and often offend people because of it. I'm also a bit tongue tied around people I like.
I am NOT gifted, otherwise I'd scare my man off.
Love interest: Let's think for a minute...don't know? LIAM IRONARM IS MY HUNK OF BURNIN LOVE! :D
Does Alanna the gifted one who scared Liam off count as a significant other? Cause, ya know, she kinda scared him off...see, Tammy freed my man FOR me...of course she also killed him off but SHH nobody need know that.
Occupation: I'm ex-Shang. I started training but I got in a battle with a novice and said novice stabbed out my left eye (see the patch ISN'T just a fashion statement lol) Now I just kind of wander, I'm sometimes a performer, I sing alto...
I am friends with Eda Bell from Shang, she knows I love Liam...I want at least ONE kiss from my man, got that!?! I mean...if its not too much trouble I would appreciate it if somewhere in my chapter...BAH screw politeness I WANNA KISS HIM
I think that's about it...yep. I look forward to seeing how this turns out.
~Liams Kitten~ |
 decayedb3auty 2003-10-17 . chapter 1Name~Lady Stacie
Location~Daine=o)
Description of Looks~Long blonde hair,greyish blue eyes,cute smile
Description of Personality~perky,happy,talkative,outgoing...you get the picture:D
Giftedness, if at all~wild magic!i wanna be daine's apprentice
Love interest~Dom=o)
How to (erhm) dispose of a significant other already in place~you think of it
Occupation~you think of it
Anything else you want to tell me~not really*.* |
 Lady Lorene 2003-10-17 . chapter 1I love this idea, and like so many other people, I'm reviewing them all.
Name... My name is Lorene, but my nicknames are Ren oe Rene
Location...(This includes time setting, as in Kel, Daine, Alanna or stuck smack in the middle.)
A little after George visits Alanna in the desert.
Description of Looks... I'm 5'5". I have short, dirty, blonde hair, blue eyes and very proportional
Description of Personality...I'm shy in the beginning, but once you get to know me, you can't shut me up. I'm very playful, understanding, but when you piss me off, I'm pissed.
Giftedness, if at all...a combonation of the Sight and the Gift.
Love interest...I think this time I'll go with George
How to (erhm) dispose of a significant other already in place...a duel, I don't know what about, but a duel
Occupation...a theif
Anything else you want to tell me...I'm good with knives and hand to hand combat. Maybe have some Shang training
Thre you go! Thanx |
 pranksterqueen 2003-10-17 . chapter 1coolie
Name:Yepara
Location:Alanna time. Jamila valley
Description of looks:redish blondish brownish hair dark dark emerald eyes pale skin with a couple of frecles above right hand corner of mouth red full lips hands are really gracefull.
Personality:shy withdrawn really good at playing jokes on people gets hurt alot
Gift:yes
Type: can read the stars and water and air magic
Love intrest:Raoul
Occupation:Animal calmer
Anything else: I have a wolf called Moonshadow and Moonshadow looks like a shadow with amber eyes. |
 an anonymous geek 2003-10-17 . chapter 1these things are so much fun. I'm almost positive that it was i that started all of them. i think mine was the first on this website, but i may be mistaken.
Name- Kristiana of Pearlmouth
Location- Pealmouth (you can make up where it is, 'cuz i havent got a clue. its mentioned in the books, but it may just be a fort and I'm a complete idiot to think of it as a fief. its in tortall)
Description of looks- dark blond hair (almost brown but not quite) blue-grey eyes. long lashes, finely arched eyebrows, full lips, the usual. I just want to make myself pretty 'cuz I'm not like that in real life. oh, and major muscles!! but not exactly like popeye(sp?)
Description of personality- well, I'm tough (that part's true at least) uhh, i am smart and slightly witty
giftedness- none
love interest- Neal, the cutie
how to dispose of a significant other- it turns out that Yuki was actually an assassin to kill Jon, but she gets caught by me (muahahaha)
Occupation- shang (joined when I was 5)
Other junk- uh, well my dad's name is Gatalion and my mum is Nalla. I've got a sister named Kalin (she's two years younger than me) and you can make up my past
please have lots of action and. . .FLUFF! just not pg-13 stuff. nasty!
thankies!
~Kristin |
 Destria 2003-10-16 . chapter 1 Name: Faelyn('Fae')
Location: after Kel. About the time, or a little later, of Trickster's Choice.
Description of Looks: Pale skin. Straight, blonde hair, down to her waist. Wardrobe depends on job. But she's in breeches, and a white blouse with balloon sleeves, when not working. Long fingers.
Description of Personality: She's extremely suspicous of most people, comes fomr living on the streets most of her life. She's kind of edgy when she's acting like herself, but relaxes among people she trusts. She's freindly, but not overly so,a nd has a very cool temper. She can adjust herself to new personality easily.
Giftedness: she only has enough to tell if someone's lieing.
Love interest: hhmm... Thom, as in Alanna's son. I do believe he's going for knighthood? isn't he? *shrugs*
How to (erhm) dispose of a significant other already in place: killed in the field?
Occupation:Her family were merchants, and died when she was very young. So, she was trained, and is now one of the youngest Royal Spies, in the field.
Anything else you want to tell me:nope.
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Loved the thought! and here's your responce. E-mail me if you ahve any comments, Q's, or concerns! |
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