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| FireChildSlytherin5 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseI too thought about how Hama thought and felt during the battle, before and after. Know anymore? Great one-shot. :) |
| an elf 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseIs the boy around 7 or 8? If a sword is too heavy for him to lift and if he is still young enough to run crying to his mother because he is scared than obviously he is way to young to fight. Even a 13 year old boy is young, but there is a difference between a 13 year old and a 7 year old. A 13 year old won't come crying to his mother and he is strong enough to carry a sword. |
| a dwarf 2007-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hope that little boys around the age of six weren't made to fight. |
| Ohkami 2003-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a wonderful little story! I always like trying to imagine the story through characters/extras who don't have real parts. Great job. |
| Eldameldo-but i moved 2003-11-13 ch 1, | abuse*stunned silence* wow. that's all i can say. okay, maybe i can say more - I LOVE IT! i apploud you for writing something so outstandingly unique! And it was so nicely writen! wow. |
| Gershwhen 2003-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely story. The interaction between the boy and Legolas was very touching. I bet Legolas' gentle demeanor would make him very good with children. I hope you consider sharing additional (and longer!) stories. |
| Larnia 2003-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's nice to read a story that has a different point of view. Good job. :) |
| Sunsetcheetah 2003-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really nice short story^_^ It was really sweet and showed what a young Rohirrim boy might be thinking about before going into battle. I liked how Legolas proved to the young boy how wrong the adults were with out even knowing it. Write some more stories! Check ya later CAtz! |
| TheAnonymousAgent506 2003-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot! I love how you told it from a completely fresh POV! It's very well written! I love how you went into the minds of the greater population of the Rohirrim, and not just Theoden or Aragorn or Eomer. And the very last part is great! It's overall an uplifting, excellent piece. |
| Susomaru 2003-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI absolutly love your story! You did an excelent job with it! Espectially describing the feelings a little boy would have in that situation. I couldn't have done any better myself! Keep up the excelent work! |