This is an awesome story, but there are SO many grammar mistakes and words missing in ALL the chapters. Sure my mind can fill in a few words, but there are some parts where I am sure even SENTENCES are MISSING. Other than that, good story.

That was brilliant...a little hard to read...but still brilliant..this how HP7 shuld have been..you have nothing to worry about keep writing...still you shuld have told us what happens after in another chapter...the end after voldemorts death was a bit sudden...love it

This would be a great story, but it has to suffice at being a good story due to the fact that in almost every chapter, if not all of them, there were far too many missing words, many of which made sentences either impossible to understand or completely missing aside from the quotation marks and the punctuation. This really should have been read over a few times to find those errors before or soon after posting.

Ok I am hooked. This looks like it is going to be a good story.

Overall this was good. I liked your story line and the pace that you kept the story. I would really recommend getting a beta. Some of the sentences didn't make sense and were confusing. Other than that though this was really enjoyable, keep up the good work.

I didn't favorite this story until chapter 23, and then only after I had read the last 3 paragraphs.

Woof.

*melts*

Hey your story is great but there are a lot of missing words, you should go over it.

great story!

"He was tall, about 5 foot 8 or so" sorry, but 5"8' is not classed as tall... Made me giggle, and not in a good way, more in a 'yeah, whatever' kinda way. also, please spellcheck. Also, this is a story, not an SMS, so please use full versions of words (ie; "you" not "u"). other than these points, it's almost a readable story...

:) it was really good!! i just wantedto let you know that in part of the story there are words that are missing, it makes reading it a bit jarring.

But i really enjoyed the story!

I'm tired of reading story's of Harry always forgiveing everyone after what they do to him. Didn't like this story at all, wast of my time.

This seems interesting, but every couple sentences you are missing key words which is making it hard to read. Please read over this and fix it. Good idea though.

It's a good story, I just hate the fact that all of your commas have been converted to periods. It's quite funny, all of your come's are now e's! I love the story anyways!

I'd leave a signed review, but i've forgotten the email i used to sign up.

anywhoo,

Mokushi Ryuu

wonderful story! im glad this didnt turn into a "harry hates the whole world and kills everyone for revenge" type of story. he still has a good heart even after the betrayal of everyone he loved. good job!

i love the beg but
i wish harry never forgave them lol
only sev is an exception lol
great job btw =]