Aw. Guess if that is a sad "aww" or a fluffylicious "aww". Go on, guess!
The truth is that I don't know which one it is. I wanted Sarah to stay with Jack and become a vicious pirate the world would be able to read about in the future (even though it took place in a novel) like Anne Bonny, but I suppose that's not a lifestyle suited for poor Sarah.
At the same time I wanted Jack to not care because, let's face it, Jack's only love is the Black Pearl, which you also made clear, don't think I forgot, mwaha.
So maybe the "aww" is a mixture. It all ends well for both Jack and Sarah, all is well.
I have to say though, I would not read the sequel if there was one, sorry dear.
Although your writing was simple, it felt real. You write similiar to Anne Rice, except for the fact that she is very keen on being detailed in a boring way (which you're not mind you).
Since this wasn't a plot made up by you, I cannot really give you any creative critisism.
If I recall correctly you wanted to be a published author, so when you do become a "real" author, please let us/me know.

I did (enjoy this installment)! However, one thing that bothers me is that all of these happenings seems to occur within about two days, when in reality it would take weeks (depending on how far away Isla de Muerta is from Port Royal). But that's the only thing that annoys me.
You have caputured Jack in a very believable way. Now, I'm not an expert, but I find Jack's ignoring of Sarah quite realistic and true to his nature. I also like the character Sarah.
This is the only fanfic ever that I've read that has got a OOC for a main character, but I'm enjoying myself. This is also the only fanfiction (save two one-shots about Jack and Elizabeth) that I've read that is set in another fandom than Harry Potter (I love my Draco and Hermione, yes).
Anyway, I'm just going to watch Benny and Joon now, then I'll keep on reading this entruiging piece of work :)

You certainly have my attention now. I was waiting for the water to boil and thought I would wait by beginning this fic... I forgot the boiling water. I think that sums it up. I'm liking this fic already.

Good story! Not quite sure I liked the ending though! I was rooting for her to stay with Jack. Good Job!

Awesome story! ^^

Love the story. Very well put together and written. Usually some time travel stories are about girl who knows every single fact about the book or novel or movie they have been dropped into and they can fight, every guy wants to have relations with them...in escence a Mary Sue. But not yours. Very, very nice. Love the little review song at the end by the way. It made write this review. hehe :)

Hi

This is one of the most realistic, heartwarming and practical fic I have ever read. You not only stick to Jack's character, you also make the situations very believable (except getting sent back in time by a book but that's still unique in concept).

This is really great and I hope you create other such great fics.

Keep up the good work!

i know its been a long while since you updated this story...and you may no longer be interested in doing so...but i just cant get enough of this story and would love to read some new chapters...i just cant stand that sarah and jack arent together

I stumbled across this by accident and am glad that I did. Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Would love a sequel.

Kate

I absolutely adore your story! It's such a well- written, thought-out, wonderfully descriptive story!

I really hope you make a sequal!

I must say that I find this fic rather enjoyable. =) I will admit that I'm a little disappointed with the dialogue, since it seems to be mostly copying the script word for word (which doesn't involve that much imagination, honestly), but other than that it's wonderful. And Jack/OC may be used a lot, but I honestly can never get tired of it. =D

Wow. Just... Wow.

I have been trying to look for a story just like this...

If you could only see a standing ovation!

This is by far the most brilliant POTC fic I have ever read! I loved ever bit of t from start to finish! ^_^

Wow. Really good writing, I have to say right there. I really like the story already. It seems truely interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I hope nothing happens to Sarah, cause of the guys that followed her into the store. Well, I guess I'll find out in ch.2. :)

If you haven't already, going to check as soon as send this in, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE DEAD MAN"S CHEST SEQUEL! This was a great story, loved every minute of it. Keep writing!