great story!

urrm... write more? lol
I think it's going good, but I need to read the next chapter...really, I do!

all the chapters where good exept the 4 one and no one cares about grammer when reveiwing and not everone watches sm so if they don't know something hey you shound't inculd it in your story update soon

acutally it just means 18 not andriod 18

OMG! YOU'RE HILARIOUS! I LOVE THE TEQUILA THING WITH DENDE I LAUGHED REALLY HARD AND MY BROTHER'S ALL, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" lol!!

Oops... That's 'Cold Night'. I forget these things; new summer job, working on college applications and all that, you know! Anyway, another great chapter! I commend you on your writing!

And I'll have to check out that story 'Kokuhaku'. It sounds interesting!

Aww, poor Gohan! I will read more of this; I just don't have time... *sniff* And I'm going to read more of your stories; I'm so glad to see someone else who loves Gohan as much as I do!

And thank you so much for reading my story 'Dark Night'. In case you're interested, I'm going to continue the story with more chapters.

*Cackles evilly* Muahahaha! I have you under MY mind control! MUAHAHAHAHA! :D
You always were funny with bashing the characters that we ALL love to HATE. But Hercule as a Bloated Teletubby? HAHAHAHAHAH!
Oh so V-chan's a hybrid Saiyan like Gohan? Coolness! *Marches around with big sign "SIMBA-RULZ WRITES COOL FICS!"*
UPDATE!
AAS-sama *Bows*

this is very good keep up the good work, i will definately be back again he he. You write so well, what's your secret he he i need to become a way better writer :P
Will talk l8rz
With Love Lunic

Really good. Pure genuis. Yes, Gohan-chan is so cute! Please update soon!

WTF? your story doesnt even make sense?!

Hi! I'm Keruseyu...Keruseyu is japanese for Kelsey...But anyway, this story is SO COOL! Please continue it! I mean, I BOOKMARKED this place!!

In response to [3]- the real name is Papaya Island
Plus-- you changed currancies from Dollar to Zenni from entrance fees to prize money.
Other than that... :D

UPDATE!

interesting story so far, and in case you still wanted to know, the real tournament location is Papaya Island