 Winterrain 11/28/10 . chapter 1 I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I wanted to let you know that I really liked it. Meena is a great character, and I'm going to go look for the other story about her now. |
 Jaelle17 3/28/05 . chapter 1Wow...I like how you had the herald-trainee be more disturbed by the dream than her counterpart. A person in her situation could easily be jealous and angry, even of/at a simple dream. |
 Shadow 12/20/03 . chapter 1 This is creepy but it's also sad is this a continueing trend? |
 Dragonsdaughter1 10/19/03 . chapter 1Very well done. |
 Stee 10/18/03 . chapter 1 Whoa, very interesting, made me think. Nice job. |
 Dreamspinner K'Chona 10/17/03 . chapter 1I likey! |
 Sethi 10/17/03 . chapter 1 weird, but good. Thought prokoking, which is always good.
:)
Sethi |
 etcetera-cat 10/17/03 . chapter 1Bloody hell Sena!
*wishes she could write like that*
And I'm now going to find some loo roll to blow my nose... |
 Ghrathryn 10/17/03 . chapter 1Definitely not normal Valdemar, its sort of reminiscent of the TV series 'Sliders,' but not quite. That would be really creepy even if it is only a dream; meeting yourself, seeing what you could have become had you taken the other path at some point in your life, not something I want to do.
Been having problems lately Sena, 'cause this is the first story you've posted for a fair old time. When are you going to update with your other stories? 'Evolution' and 'Devil Mine' to name just two.
Darkfyre |