Ah. I see. I'd been wondering about for a while now and i guess I got my answer. Heh.


have you thought about going back and re-editing the story to change facts or such?

And as far as Zack's last name went... actually when the game ff7 came out, they had his last name listed, and long before CC was published.


Still, i love how you changed the start of the story and how now the chapters follow along with the 'game'. I'm wondering now how it will end as I haven't finished it just yet. Will it be a happy ending I wonder. And I can guess who the ' three' children where that where taken from cloud's body. M would that count as the one child law Valkyres fall under, or since it wasn't her own natural birth if she'd be able to bare more... food for thought.

This should be interesting to read as it unfolds. Even if i'm behind in chapters, I'd just recently refound this piece after losing it a long while ago.

I do have one odd question though... for Zack why do you use the last name of Donovan? Or is it just a little personal quark instead of using his actual last name of Fair?

Hi there yashodoa, I haven't read through the whole story so far, only up to chapter 44, but I just felt I had to leave a review.

First of all, I am impressed with how long this story is. Long stories rock! Yea! You obviously have the heart and mind of a writer, all these plot lines spinning around... that takes a lot of imagination.

I guess the only disappointments in this story-- for me, anyway-- were all of the spelling and grammatical errors. They really made it difficult for me to stick with the story, and I'm still not sure if I'll be able to read all 70 chapters posted thus far. I know that in your profile you say that you are trying your best to improve, and all I can say is good luck, just keep writing and trying. And, well, if you ever need a beta... I'd be happy to volunteer!

hai Kak Yashodoa!

It's been a long time since I read and review you stories! I don't know, nearly a year? I've got problem with my networking and now I use mobile broadband cause i've been away from my home, means i got my degree in U. because of U's stupid school-style blocking system i cant also get through your site and through your fan .

Now I seldomly use it now, find it finally got read your fic, but you're finally UPDATE! its been so long! After I got my good allowance I had to find my new laptop and get well in networking to review yours as well.

Now I the one talking, say Kak Yashodoa, have you describe the appearance of female Cloud in your latest chapter? make me know! I like to know!^o^ if not, can i make her? well in my own...can i?can i?can i? pretty please?

Right now I dont use much for my Yahoo email add, now use my Gmail, you can email me at syikin..

after my torture days in not getting to my network i was soo excited to see your fic again! I writing too much did't i?

Really hoped to see your next update as well, AND I as well gotta checkup you site! SEE YA!

(kak/ kakak= refer to a natural respect among Malay women who's older >you can say I've call you sister, but in respect, not sibling> if you've been tourist to Malaysia, you will know...but please dont call them 'kak', it will cause them in shock to think that you will know Malay too well...hhehehe...

Wow...just WOW! This is best and most thought out fic I've ever written-one of the longest too! You go girl! Uh...you are a girl, right? Cuz that would so awkward if you weren't...
Anyways, my favourite chappies have to be the wedding ones! Zack's speech was awesome!
Oh, and since you aren't using him -grabs Zack- I'll cuddle him until you do!
Butterscotch Cake for you!
Oh, and don't even /think/ of trying to get Zack back before the time! -pulls out evil looking long handled axe- I'll be waiting to cut off the hand that reaches my way!

great im soo glad ur back! i thought u forgot us!
devotedly,
one of your loyal readers

Epic Fail Clouds a girl, it is CLEFIROTH, and Clouds a girl.

E! Another chapter! Yea!

Vincent's not going to have a good reaction if he finds his grandchildren and their friends wondering about Gaea the Seventh... Kind of a scary picture, actually.

But their hearts are in the right place, though.

I'll see you next chapter!

wow!

simply wow!

but boy do I hope he's wrong about never seeing them again!

nice twist by the way about sere and sora

Hey! Cool, an update! I wasn't expecting it this morning. It was a nice surprise. =smiles=

Still going down memory lane, I see. It was a good chapter, I really liked it!

I'll see you around the next update! Bye!

I must say I love this story I hope to see more soon!

geez...took you long enough...

well...i guess i get impatient over such things...

It's really a good chapter though! I've had this on my favorites for some time now and well...It's one of my favorites out of my favorites!

Do keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more!

-Dis

Two chapters? Lucky us! Yay for King Mickey!

Zack was the first to be eaten by darkness? (sniffle) It's always my beloved Zack who goes down first, isn't it? Why?

I like how this expands the plot of the original Serendipity. It fills in a lot more of the backstory, and how things got to the point that they were at when the original started. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Li

So this is before Sora was born? Okay, that makes sense.

I like all the kids! You're good at giving each of them a distinct personality. Sere should be... eight? And Odin's thirteen, right?

Happy New Year, a little late!
Li

kingdom hearts
^_^
sounds interesting