Okay everything's cool ecxcept for one misspelling. It's Sirius not Surrus. You've been spelling it wrong the whole time. It's Sirius. Not Surrus. See you later besides that everything's perfect.

I LOVE it, though i still can't understand why you get reviews and i don't... there's something wrong here... :( anyway. brilliant!

This was really good, I liked the characters. One thing though... you spelled Sirius as Sirrus throughout the entire thing, so you might want to think about replacing that.

that was great please update!
-Liseli

Ahh...totally gratifying. Best story I've read in a while. I've got to send my bud Mickey on of these challenge thingies...

S-I-R-I-U-S

Hey great story! I was just wondering if you were taking challenges again for ideas on the next chapter of that story? If you are then here's mine:
Characters: James Sirius Remus Peter Snape Lily
Item:A bucketful of crickets
Quote:Why are you chasing a squirrel up the whomping willow?
Conclusion:James gets covered in crickets courtesy of Lily